Songs that u wrote
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Thread Topic: Songs that u wrote
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Actually, now I think it's crap.
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I like your song.
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no, its not crap!! thats really epic!!! nice song! i like the mysterious and dark titles in your album... sweet!
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my songs are crap
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I doubt they are, post them and I'll say something that will make you happy, and thanks Biance and Alana for liking my song, I thought it was a bit dramatic after I'd posted it. ^-^
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I doubt they are, post them and I'll say something that will make you happy, and thanks Biance and Alana for liking my song, I thought it was a bit dramatic after I'd posted it. ^-^
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beatleslover Newbieok..well here's asong i wrote.. i write a lot but this is my favorite..hope everyone likes it!
Verse 1:
Love is such a funny little thing. You may be in love and the next day you may not be
Chorus:
It can push you down it can pick you back up spin you around and you're ok.
it can brake your heart it can tear it apart..tape it back together and you're ok..it just works that way.
Verse 2:
Every girl has that guy they call the one..the guy they beleive to be their love, but then he comes around and says good-bye..love is confusing that's no lie.
Chorus:
It can push you down it can pick you back up spin you around and you're ok.
it can brake your heart it can tear it apart..tape it back together and you're ok..it just works that way.
(slows down and repeats chorus)
yes..it just works that way. -
That was very very nice! I liked how you wrote that from your experience, what do you call it?
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I see somthing
walking slow
she has no friends
that's all I know
chorus
why is the world so mean
to have nobody for anything
nobody for you to cry on their shoulder
nobody to help you move a boulder
nobody to laugh at your jokes
nobody to share their cokes
I see sombody crying now
tear's pouring all over her face
chorus
that's all I got, crap right -
wow. great song, beetleslover. i love the inspiration from your own experiences. all my songs come from my experiences too. bluestar - nice start. i hope you post the other part of the song as soon as you write it so we can evaluate it fairly.
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I like it, blue star, it was actually quite nice how you wrote about the world for what it really is, but you should make the verses longer, a verse can't be 2 lines, can it?
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yes a verse can actually be one word if you fit it right in the song... any length verse as long as it complements the song, and doesnt take away the effect. (sorry i sound like such a know-it-all but i have been writing songs since i wuz 2)
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*perk's up from depression* Yay
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^-^
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*does happy dance*
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