I wrote something.
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Thread Topic: I wrote something.
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I stood at the corner of the sidewalk waiting for Jake. It was their two year anneversity. Jake walked up the sidewalk with a small bear in his hands. For the past two years, Jake everyday handed her a stuffed bear and left. Jake handed her the bear and turned around. "Jake!" I cried and he turned around. "I love you, " I said with a small smile. He left without a response. This always happens. I went back inside. Tommrow is my 16th birthday, I thought happily. I went to sleep that night, and when I woke up I got up and went outside. I saw Jake on the sidewalk, with another girl. He was taking a large stuffed bear from her. He looked over at me and walked over with the large bear, and held it out to me without a word. I looked at him. "I'M SICK OF THIS! I DON'T WANT THIS STUPID BEAR!" I grabbed the bear and threw it onto the road. "YOU CANT EVEN TELL ME HAPPY BIRTHDAY AND CANT EVEN TELL ME YOU LOVE ME? I HATE THESE STUPID BEARS!" Jake walked into the road and picked up the bear. He looked at me sadly. A truck turned onto the road and came rolling toward him. "Jake. There's a truck coming. JAKE!" I screamed as the truck ran him and the bear over. I cried and kneeled down beside him. I picked up the bear and ran inside. I was so angry and sad. I ran upstairs to my room and threw myself onto my bed. I took all the bears I had on my shelf and threw them around. I calmed myself down and began counting them. When I was done, I set them down in a neat pile. I picked one up and hugged it for confort. I heard "I love you." I looked down at the bear. I took another one a squeezed it "I love you." I picked them up one by one and each said "I love you." I picked up the big one and hugged it. Out came Jake's voice. "Hey Amanda. Happy birthday. I wanted to tell you that I love you. I am too nervous to tell you that in real life...I love you so much." I stared at the big bear. He has always loved me.
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Feels. ;-;
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;-; so sad
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1. It changed point of views, just saying.
2. I read something like that on Facebook. Only the girl wanted a ring (wedding ring), but got one bear instead. When he died and she hugged the bear it said, "will you marry me?" and had a ring inside. -
Awwww i can feel my heart melting.
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Its sad, but I didn't cry. I'm not really emotional with stuff like this.
Very well written though. -
It's too much like that stuff from Facebook that Teresa was talking about to really elicit an emotional response from me. Not to mention, the changing views was buggy. Sorry.
But it is kinda creative though. -
That's so sad. If that happened to me I'd be absolutely distrought.
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Cute, but yes, too Facebook-ish.
Although it was adorable but at the same time sad. -
I'm heartless didnt find it really that sad at all :3
Well written though
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