I need ideas.
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Thread Topic: I need ideas.
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OK. So I looking at an old character, that I was thinking of remaking. I found how she fell in love with another character that I made up. This is what I wrote:
Amara was enjoying her stay with Ryan and his friends. Still having no idea that Jasper and Tomas both liked her; she bumped into them when they were fighting (literally fighting as in attacking) over her. She had tried to stop them but they wouldnt listen. After they had all fallen from each others attacks, Amara scolded them. She told them she was not any kind of prize and that they should treat her with more respect. She then stormed out of the room enraged, leaving Jasper and Tomas feeling guilty.
A few days later, Amara meditating outside by herself thinking about leaving the teams and trying live her own life. She had made her decision, but then Tomas came up to her and apologized for his actions with Jasper. Before Amara could answer, Tomas revealed his true feelings to her and they kissed. Amara then remarked that she might just stay a while. She then joined the team and apologized to Jasper who was fine with it and told Amara to do whatever her heart told her to do. She then answered that she was following her heart when she joined Team Believe, and couldnt wait to get back home. Her new home.
Ignore how vague and general and dumb it is and just help me with a new way that Amara and Tomas fall in love.
The fighting over the girl thing is so overused in my opinion and I just need an idea.
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How about she was attacked by a guy that wanted to take her to the devil when Tomas jumps in and rescues her. Something like that.
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How about she was attacked by a guy that wanted to take her to the devil when Tomas jumps in and rescues her. Something like that.
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Devil?? Umm...well she becomes friends in the end...so I don't think that would work...
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Or just to take her to the bad guys. I just said Devil as an exaple.
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Well this is more of a realistic fiction thing...so no bad guys...
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hm... make it to where she is falling in love with another guy and the other two become jealous and they host a tournament or contest to decide who gets her. and after a while everything just goes a wreck.
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