I am posting a chapter of my new book every day or so!
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Thread Topic: I am posting a chapter of my new book every day or so!
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Woo! You posted more..that was quick ha ha. I really liked it, it was exciting keep it up
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this was pretty good. although the closest i ever played to a game like this is left 4 dead but left 4 dead isnt nowhere near this sorry i get off subject fast,but this is good
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If you noticed in the prologue he said "wife and kids"
Amanda (wife)
Ashley (daughter)
Jason (son)
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Nice! Keep it up.
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Chapter 2
I pulled out my cell. I knew that I needed to save my battery, but I wanted make sure they are safe.
"Hello?"
I smiled.
"Hey Amanda."
"Dante!? Where the hell are you!?"
"Uhhh 95 I think. Are you safe?"
"Yea. We're in the airport security station-"
I lost connection. I cursed under my breath. I put the cell away and saw the building, but something felt strange.I pulled up, running over an infected for fun, and got out.
"Here it goes."
I headed in.
prt 1 -
(95: Highway 95)
prt 2
As I headed in the smell hit me first. Rotting meat...I headed to an elevator. As I walked in an infected grabbed me. I slammed the infected down to the floor. The doors closed, decapitating him.
As I reached the top floor the smell got worse. I turned a corner and saw the remains of the survivor. "No. No. NO!"
There was a pain in my hand. I looked and saw where the infected in the elevator. I fell to my knees and passed out. -
o.o so.. do i know whe dead guy on the ground or not?
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Yeah but it would still sound weird to say, "me, Dante, was" when you put something between ",," it's to clarify usually and the sentence should make sense as if you were reading it without whatever's between them. Or you could've had another character say his name/introduce it a different way. Just saying.
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:O more please
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This is awesome. Seriously.
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