Ok I am writing this because I feel like it...
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Once opon a time there was a girl. She had just moved from the swamps of Florida to the nowhere forest in Transilvania, Romania. She sat up in a tree looking over the nothingness of what used to be wonderful. You see you might think moving to a place that once thrived is not nearly as good as it sounds. It is nothing but a sad emty echo of what used to be. Quietly she threw her legs to the side and fell out of the tree. Her combat boots hit the ground with an empty thunk. She had heard the rumors of the boy that a few years ago fell from that exact tree and pursued farther into the dark forest never to be seen again. Of course she never belived in the tellings of the twisted and mangled towns people. They were too scared to come out of their houses, but still she couldnt shake the feeling she was being watched. She shook away the thought and silently truged her was home. The single natural white streak in her midnight black hair trailed behind her caught in the wisper of a forgotten breeze.
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Hm. Not bad! Keep it up! :)
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I loved it! Will you continue?
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She shoved her way into her mansion of a house where her parents bickering could be heard from the front porch. She tried to make shure the front door wouldnt shreik its high pitched wail but it was a rebel of a door and did it anyway. She paused when the bickering suddenly stoped and heavy footsteps made their way closer and closer to where she stood. "Where have you been you little slu_t?" Her father boomed rounding the corner of the hallway and stoping in front of her. Fist raised. "Out." she hissed and then the pain started. Strike after strike came down opon her arms and back after she curled into a fetal position. She felt a unfamiliar flame of raw emotion lick at her heart untill the strikes stopped and after a few minutes she uncurled and made her way to her bedroom. She opened the heavy black door and streaked across the room onto her bed closing and locking the door behind her. She slipped under the over sized bed and lay there. Staring blankly at the under side of her bed. No emotins to tie you down, she thought. Be the girl you were meant to be. Dont let your own darkness overwhelm yourself. Ballance your light and dark. You will survive.
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by the way my friend who now lives with me in my tree house is what this is based on. I just wrote the story.
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It great, sad, but great
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The next day her mother and father woke her up. Their bright smiles beamed down on her with a light so false it hurt. She hated this part. When the dust settles every one apologises. They almost never mean it. Especialy her parents. It was because she wasnt theirs. Their daughter died a long time ago. That is what they belive. Sarafine was a beautiful bright girl who did everything perfectly untill the day she died. She was revived and a mysterious white streak appeared the next day. She was never the same. Her blood had spilled. Not only that but she wasnt their blood. Adoption was her parents only chance. She gazed at her mother and the bruises that had riddled her face. "Happy birthday sweety. We" choke "love you." "No you dont, Mom. You guys stoped loving me long ago." Sarafine said bluntly. A ripple of anger crossed her parents faces but it was her mothers fist that came down opon her. The first time. This time the flame in her heart spread and a great pain went ripping through her causing her to cry out in utter pain. Then she opened her eyes and her parents stood over her. Eyes wide. "You- your a monster!" her mother cried and her voice shook. "Am I the monster mother? Have you looked in the mirror lately!" you shreiked and then your fangs peirced her throught.
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Then she dropped her as her fragile heart beat finaly died. Then her head snapped over to the father and found him crumpled on the floor dead. "What..."she wispered. In the blink of an eye the bodies disinegrated right in frount of her. Shocked she slid into the crimson colored corner of her bed room and rocked back and forth. She did nothing but shake and stare as dusk fell and she was lifted from the ground and carried across the night and into the forest. Nothing but try and gather the shattered peices of her soul slowly slipping away as the night came to an end and midnight crept closer and closer...
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You should be a book writer
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Venom Newbie*cries* Jk! I'm not a crier. But great story! Keep it up! :)
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Thx its not over yet! I ust was talking to some one.
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Good!
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She awoke with a groan and felt weird. Like all the blood had rushed to her feet. "Mighty sleepy arnt cha?" said a feminin voice and her eyes snapped open.She found herself across from a girl about fifteen super tall, with black hair like yours but with a purple streak, and had the most enchanting violet blue purple eyes ever. It took her a moment before she found out what was off about her. She had very pointy fangs in her mouth and very wolfish ears resting on her head. "Sonofa-" "Yeah... I wouldnt be talking I am not the one tied to a tree... Sarafine right? I used to know you when you were younger. We were sisters..." the girl said as a sad look crossed her face. You stared at her confused "Sister?!"
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"Yeah... I dont age much." Ellise chuckled sawing at the ropes with her finger nail. "So I wasnt adopted. Just kidnapped..." she said amazingly giddy. "Woah there girl. Thats not something to be happy about you know..." "I... Actualy it is. It means that I have you now..." Then there was a pause of silence nd thee ropes snapped. When her feet hit the ground her knees buckled and Ellise had to snatch her up again. "Look. I am thrilled to be here with you, but there are people I have spent my life keeping away from you. If you stay with me you must-" Ellise stoped midsentence and her eyes widened startled. "Run!" she wispered as an arrow peirced through her back and she fell to her knees blood trickling from her mouth onto the forest floor. "Ellise!" she shreiked but before she ran to her she paused. Her last wish was for her to run. Lets run...
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If you want me to write more comment! I am taking a short break brb.
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