Unfinished/utitled poem.

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Carrotop Novice

12 years ago

I'm older
A new day awaits.
These barriers still bringing me down
Right to the ground
I can't stand it
And I don't know what to do
These things are bugging me
Still bringin me down.

It's a new day
Tryin to break free
Harder but I'm still me

I'm a prisoner
Still tryin to break free
Thinking I'm so alone
But that just me

A new day awaits
The battle's just begun
And I realize
I'm not alone.
Kirby Novice

12 years ago

Nice!! :D
I loved it!
Sage Parson Novice

12 years ago

IS IT YOUR BIRTHDAY AND I DON'T KNOW IT?!

This is really good! :)
Samantha2332 Junior

12 years ago

Brilliant Absolutly brilliant! Why didn't I come up with that?! Jk
Carrotop Novice

12 years ago

Thanks for all the great feedback.

SAGE, IT'S IN 9 DAYS.
Carrotop Novice

12 years ago

I finished it.

I'm not a prisoner
Any more
Because I realize
You're with me
You stand beside me
You always guide me.

A new day awaits
And I'm not alone
We're always and forever
Always and forever.
Carrotop Novice

12 years ago
Calypso1315 Junior

12 years ago

O.O

I didn't know you were this amazing at poetry...That's awesome!!
Carrotop Novice

12 years ago

Thanks, I wrote it a while ago. I have another one, I'll bump it.

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