Is my book so far alright?
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Thread Topic: Is my book so far alright?
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Lol EVEN BETTER!
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Now all those poor little children without homes shall be mine! STORY! MORE STORY!
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I had a weird sensation when it happened too! I loved it! Dalias stopped and Zach ran into him which made me run into him. I stumbled and just about fell but Zach caught me just in time.
He pointed his middle and pinky fingure at a bucket on the ground and was about the mutter something but he stopped. And turned to me, " Why not point
your middle and pinky fingure at the bucket and mutter Linaquse Dimause?" He asked me. I turned towards the bucket and regretted I ever tried the other think... I pointed my middle and index fingure at the bucket and muttered " Linaquse Dimause " In a harsh whisper. And I heard a couple of clicks, then some snaps, and the bucket lifted up and then the ground started to get a big whole to a elder and fit in, even kids my age. " Ladies first..." Dalias said.... I looked down the hole, I figured I'd jump in, so I did and I landed on a cobbled ground and there was a lot of people there and they acted like they didn't even noticed, but before I knew it, Zach was on top of me. I pushed him off and moved away before Dalias could land on the both of us. Zach followed me and hid behind me... But has soon as Dalias came down he grabbed me on the waist and thrown me up and caught me, I was didn't scream at all through, I guess my scream is out now... -
*reads*
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And brb I gotta get some medicine and then feed the animals, brb...
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Okayz
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Backz
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YAYZ! *chants* STORY TIME, STORY TIME, STORY TIME! Sorry, it's just so good!
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rofl! Figure out how to publish it for me! OMG BRB!
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OMG, AGAIN?! Okayz, I'll look it up
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Thanks and yah... I added a bookmark about it and I wanted to look at it real quick, I am goofy ;)
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GOOFY! *chants* STORY TIME, STORY TIME, STORY TIME!
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He pointed his middle and pinky fingure at a bucket on the ground and was about the mutter something but he stopped. And turned to me, " Why not point
your middle and pinky fingure at the bucket and mutter Linaquse Dimause?" He asked me. I turned towards the bucket and regretted I ever tried the other think... I pointed my middle and index fingure at the bucket and muttered " Linaquse Dimause " In a harsh whisper. And I heard a couple of clicks, then some snaps, and the bucket lifted up and then the ground started to get a big whole to a elder and fit in, even kids my age. " Ladies first..." Dalias said.... I looked down the hole, I figured I'd jump in, so I did and I landed on a cobbled ground and there was a lot of people there and they acted like they didn't even noticed, but before I knew it, Zach was on top of me. I pushed him off and moved away before Dalias could land on the both of us. Zach followed me and hid behind me... But has soon as Dalias came down he grabbed me on the waist and thrown me up and caught me, I was didn't scream at all through, I guess my scream is out now...
He put me back on the ground a bit disappointed because of no scream and we followed Dalias again. He opened a door and walked in.. " Hello Mr. Frintzlots, we got two new children to buy a wand or a lightfrinza..." Dalias said when he entered. The man we seen was a young man, in his twenties I suppose. On my opinion he was cute... " Hello children and what are your names and age?" The man, Mr. Frintzlots, said. " I am Mindona, and this is Zach. We are both eleven years old and we are here because we need supplies for Defense for Wizards and Vampires school." I said calmly. He smiled at me and Zach " Mindona, I will get you a wand or a lightfrinza -
Wow, this is even better than J.K's stuff!
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Wow you really think so!?!?
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