Poem
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Thread Topic: Poem
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opps let me rephrase that:
Angel are with God and Jesus
In our world but,up in heaven
They can talk real soft at midnight...
And give you a better life with everyone -
That's a nice poem, it's kind of... soft and mystical, and like, I can't describe it, it's nice.
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Awesome poems you guys
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I wrote that in church. It was my assiment in 4th grade but then I quit when one year later.
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Hey I wrote this poem earlier today. It's a bit weird lol it's all what first popped into my head. It's called Beautiful Wolf
Beautiful wolf with gray fur,
eyes the tone of orange flames;
I watch as you howl at the full moon
You are free to do as you please.
Every week you stare death in the face,
knowing it's coming soon
Yet you are not afraid to die,
your pack watches over as you sleep.
Loyal loved ones and truue friends, how nice.
Oh beautiful wolf, I wish I could be like you.
At night you dream sweet dreams
even with the chance tomorrow you won't open your eyes
You lived a great life, led many out of danger's way
So selfless and giving though you are a wild animal
You are a role model for all the young cubs
Beautiful wolf, your time has finally come
After respects are paid your pack moves on
Leaving your body for the vultures and bugs -
Wow, that was so Amazing I could never write anything that good. You should work as a writer when you're older, you'll get lots of
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LOL thanks I actually would love to be a writer, I usually write like poems, songs and stories
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I've written three novels:
- Dreams come true (130 pages)
- The forest empress (185 pages)
- Pearl (A gift for my mum) (Only 16 pages but still...)
And I'm writing another, it's called The vampire's boyfriend I wrote a short version of it in the Write your short stories here thread. -
Kelly_jay NewbieOk well i had to write a sonnet for my english class so here it is- she is the life that holds my love i would trade in my soul for a life time with her the melody of her words is like the chirp of a dove i wouldn't trade in my love for the richest of furs her caution is what intrigues me any barriers that come will be dismissed for i love her so much i shall have to say a few the fire and passion burned when our lips met- by the way that was in the view of a guy cause i'm a chick:)
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That was very beautiful, I liked it so much, it was dreamy!
But what exactly is a sonnet? I don't think I've come across it before... -
Kelly_jay NewbieThanx:) i dont entirely remember but i look through my notebook and see
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I want to write a poem about. No Roady! Stop! Don't write one about vampires! Resist the addiction!
Anyway, um... uh...
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ok, this is about the night (In a dreamy way that isn't scary and doesn't envolve vamps, I swear to god!)
Under the sky I finally see
A world that seems just for me
The moon in the center shining bright
It and the stars give their lovely light
Where the world hides from day
Night is the time to sleep not play -
What d'ya think? Was it ok? OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T TELL ME IT WAS GAY!!!!!!
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Kelly_jay NewbieNo it was really good i really liked it:)
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