Blood,Sweat and Fears.
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Thread Topic: Blood,Sweat and Fears.
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Kirsten was awoken by a girl with an axe, driving the blade of her weapon into the windshield! Everyone screamed. 'It's her! It's Linnea!' Kristen screamed
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Broken glass flew everywhere. Kristen grabbed the gearstick and drove away with unusual speed. 'Christ,what the friggin hell was that about?' Mason yelled. Linnea slithered back into the darkness of the ally.
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'I'm scared.' Dacey whimpered. 'I know,sweetie.' Kristen whispered, she opened up the car doors 'Come on.' everyone clambered out and went to explore the ally.
An unsuspecting teenage couple were parked outside the allyway.As the two were ma, they heard a strange noise outside.'We should go check it.'Kennedy, the boyfriend suggested. 'I don't know. The news said something about a maniac on the loose.' his girlfriend Giselle frowned. -
Kennedy told Giselle not to be so stupid,and they both got out of their car. The young couple noticed something moving in the bushes. Kennedy started to move closer,not knowing about the unpleasent surprise awaiting him.
A rusty sickle shot out of the bushes,hooked Kennedy and ripped his intestines out! He collapsed on the ground, Giselle screamed at the top of her lungs as a woman in white with a black bag as a mask emerged from the bushes.
Giselle sprinted away,looking behind her and keeping her focus on the woman. A few seconds later, she tripped and sprained her ankle. The mysterious woman raised her sickle benieth Giselle's chin and swung it wildly...
I've gtg, everyone. Bye! -
I'm back. When I said 'Ma' I meant 'making out',BTW.
A shrill shriek came from outside the ally,Dacey jumped back in surprise. 'What the hell was that?' Mason exclaimed.When Mason suggested they check it out,Kristen hesitated. But she knew she had no choice,she'd never abandon her boyfriend and her daughter. -
Dacey clutched Mason's hand,wondering what in the friggin world was going on.Great.We're in the middle of some dark ally with a crazy b---- on the loose. That's just great.Kristen thought to herself.
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Wowzers! That was great =) Your story draws me in and I can't take my eyes off the screen, LoL. You're very good.
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Thanks, Roady.
Everyone was shocked and terrified when they saw it. Deni's severed head was lying in the middle of the allyway. 'Holy moley!' Dacey exclaimed, jumping back once again. 'Linnea, why are you doing this?' Kristen mouthed to herself. -
'If I know one thing, it's that we're not safe out here.' Mason worriedly declared 'I'm calling the cops.' he pulled out his white cell phone and dialled 911.
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wow.....Fken wow...wow...lol i just read the everything you've put up...it's um...lol...
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Thank you, Slim.
As Mason panicked into his cellphone, Dacey whimpered. 'Mommy, I think there's someone else here.' the 5 year old whispered to her mom. Kristen began to hear the clump of footsteps coming towards them. -
When her boyfriend had finally stopped communicating with the police, Kristen turned to him. 'Do you hear that?' she asked as the footsteps continued.
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Dacey's body was starting to shiver in fear that Linnea would soon appear and kill her,her would-be dad and her mother.
To everybody's surprise, it wasn't Linnea that arrived out of the darkness,but a strange man. 'Oh, my god. You've got to help, theres a killer outside the ally. There's blood and guts splattered everywhere, someone's gone insane!' he breathlessly panicked -
'A minute ago,I was attacked by this crazy b---- with a bag over her head!' the man continued. Kristen stepped forward 'That was Linnea Samuels. The girl who escaped from prison last week.' she explained.
Dacey was jolted by the sound of Linnea's sickle hitting the wall. 'she's here, mommy!' the 5 year old screamed as she saw Linnea, grasping a bloodstained sickle with someone's guts hanging like flypaper from the tip of the blade. -
Linnea stepped towards the quartet. 'Well,Kristen,look's like we meet again.' she smirked 'And take a look at that. You've got a little offspring. I bet she'll be fun to kill.' Dacey rapidly panted as the psychopath sauntered her way.
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