The Secret Butcher
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Thread Topic: The Secret Butcher
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Trinity wriggled out of Autumn's grasp and darted into the living room. the brunette slammed the door and locked it. 'Oh,my god.' she gasped,with tears dripping down her eyes like rain.
In an instant, Autumn's butcher knife stabbed through the wood of the door. Trinity shrieked whilst jumping away from the door. The homicidal babysitter kicked the door down and pounched on her innocent victim. Just as Autumn lifted her weapon,Trinity managed to crawl away.
Autumn looked up, and saw the TV set fall off the bureau.The very next second,the babysitter's head collided with the screen and she was electricuted. As Autumn's body jolted constantly, Trinity curled up in the corner of the room.
A neighbor heard all the commotion and called the police. When the cops opened up the door, the first things that caught their eyes were the dead bodies hidden all around the house. A few hours later,the found Trinity curled up in the corner, babbling to herself and rocking back and forth. Her previously brown hair had turned completely white,her eyes rolled back into her head and now,she was totally insane.
Trinity was locked up in a mental hospital,and her horrible nightmares still last...
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What do you guys think?
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that's really good Angel!! and you used some of my names cool! *claps*
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Thanks,Scar. Did you read the whole thing.
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yes
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Wow! Did you have a favorite part at all?
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i liked the part where Autumn was chasing Trinity to kill her and Trinity killed her instead
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That was the full-on action scene. I never thought I could write something like that!
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but it was so cool!
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Thanks again,Scar.
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no prob
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I can't believe Autumn was sick enough to kill a four year old boy with his own blanket! It's really weird, in most of my stories,the mom dies.
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I'm going to bed. Goodnight,Scar!
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that was epic angel. your a good story writer.
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I just can't believe that this actually worked.
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