Parts From My New Book
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Book I of my new series: The Vampires
A small window was in the left corner of the room, facing west towards more green foliage and letting in the light from the sun, even though it was obscured under ashen clouds. As I squeezed my eyes shut, trying to get over the green and then opened them again, I caught a glimpse of the window sliding down. If I was scared before, I was petrified in fear now. My eyes were frozen on the window, but finally after five minutes of no blinking, they started to unfreeze themselves. I was able to blink and breath normally, but as my gaze flickered to other parts of the room and back to the window, I caught a glimpse of a gorgeous face. It stared at me for the shortest time, but even then, it was etched into my memory.
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Wow! That was amazing! It's so much better than I could do, I loved it! You're really good at this, SiSi!
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thanx ilm, you are a fantastic writer too!
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We had moved from Georgia, which had lots of warm, dark-banishing sun and had spilt freckles all over the high planes of my cheeks. The thought of warmth from the sky, instead of rain, made me sigh and close my eyes pretend that the bathroom light was the sun. I turned on the sink to pretend it was the river that our house looked over. The dream didn’t last long when the rain started thundering against the side of the house. I opened my eyes and turned off the sink with a rage filled-jerky movement
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Your welcome SiSi, and thanks!
Wow, that new part was really good too, I love how you described the third line. Your book is great, if you ever got it published, I'd be the first to read it. =) -
Sisi,both parts are awesome. So much better than my stories.
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thanx ilm, its good to know i have supporters
thanx angel! you are a brilliant writer! -
Thanks. I take it you've read one of my things.
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yep! its awesome!
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Moaning inwardly, we walked through the glass double doors, into a low ceiling hallway. Lockers crowded and competed for space amid classrooms while crumpled papers and sleeves protruded from the lockers like little flags. Connor lead the way through a network of corridors, the light blue rectangles never ending. I felt a smidgen more comfortable knowing that these kids seemed to be as unorganized as I was.
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That one is awesome,too!
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Yah, that third part was really great too. You're awesome SiSi.
And I always support everyone because I know what it's like when nobody wants to read your book. =( Even my mother is like that. -
thanx ilm and i'm sorry. at least she doesn't push you to finish it and let her read it.
thanks angel -
I've just wrote some of my new book (which now has a title,thank you, Roady).
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which thread did you post it on?
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