12 Years
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Thread Topic: 12 Years
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The book is going to be REALLY depressing.
I wrote a poem to go along with it...the poem's called The Life Of Jane
The drunken father,
the dead mother,
the sister who never showed her face,
the rude cousins,
and the careless aunt and uncle
The life of Jane,
something depressing,
she can't get thru it,
it's really hard,
and then they leave...
It starts to rain,
the thunder's loud,
she see's the knife,
and she grabs it...
One cut,
two cuts,
three cuts,
and many more
she stops cutting,
and now blood's gushing
Just one more cut,
that's all she needed,
she cuts one more time...
the place is blurry
the world's moving
as she falls down
the world turns black
Jane is gone..forever
Just a little summary...
Sounds depressing,huh? Probably post the first chapter tomarrow or Thursday. -
:O WOW Tht was REALLY GOOD!! I was so shocked!! Thts a FANTASTIC POEM/SUMMARY!! AWESOME JOB!! :D
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Thanks
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It's not that good xD
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Your Welcome!!
Yes It Is!! :D -
Very good! If only I was that good when I was your age :\
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Home gurl NoviceWow that's really good :)
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thats was really really good
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Thanks everyone :)
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