My Hope
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Thread Topic: My Hope
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He walked past the lake like he did everyday. Though, today the air had a different scent. He couldn't place it, but it was familiar and calming.
And then the man heard it. A baby's cry from some weeds.
He darted over, lifting her out. He took off his shirt, wrapping the frozen baby in it, as snow fell all around him.
He walked home, inspecting the small silver locket around the girl's neck.
Eclipserus
"What a pretty name..."Kebek said. The baby stopped crying, and giggled at the black hair man.
He smirked, walking inside a small house where children voices where heard, along with a beautiful singing voice.
Home.
(I will continue waitttt) -
Age 2
"Kebek~ Eclipse did it again!"My older brother, Skyre called. I huffed, sitting on the floor, huggling my stuffed bunny.
"What did she do?"Came the best voice ever. He walked over, scooping me up and glaring at Skyre.
"She ruined my drawing! Why do we ever keep her? She's going to die alone, anyway!"The seer exclaimed.
Kebek snarled, but quickly calmed himself, bending down and slapping Skyre. "You shut up. Eclipse has a home just like the rest of you. A mother to love her, a father to lead her."
Skyre huffed, blowing white blonde strands if hair from his face.
I clung to Kebek, as he took me to my room, with me yawning. -
Age 3
"Eclipse! Toss the ball over here!"Kyoko called, her black hair flying as the tall 4 year old demigod lept around.
I tossed it over toward her, giggling.
Elix smirked. He was my age. His chocolate brown hair framed his snow white face. His eyes glowed red.
But he was one of the nicest people here.
"Lalalala~"A pink haired figure said as she tripped, runninh into me.
"Oh I'm sorry Eclipse!"She exclaimed.
"Its alright, Tekk."
The girl waved, running off.
And then it happened....
A sudden explosion happened. EVERYONE in the house was dead, Kebek, Skyre, Racheal, Tekk, Ally, Low, Nahla, James....
I screamed, as ashes and debri pelted me. Kyoko scooped me up, running of, Elix on her heels.
I cried "I want Kebek!"
"He's gone Eclipse, I'm sorry..." -
Age 4
"This house is great! No one here, its abandoned!"Kyoko sung, twirling. I clung to Elix, who snickered. "Yep, perfect!"
"I just wanna go home..."I sniffed. Elix sighed, and Kyoko ran over, scooping me up and hugging me.
"Tekkuri. Eclipse. Nimka. You have to get over that and move on. This was all chaos, but think of the beauty you could make of it!"
Elix chuckled "Egyptians are dead."
Kyoko glared at him, and dragged me inside.
A flash of light appeared, enveloping us all.
"Eclipse!!!"Kyoko screamed.
"Eclipse!?"Elix called.
Then the light was gone...and I was all alone... -
Age 5 aka next day.xD
"Nimka-adu?"I called, my voice a whisper. I coughed, crying.
"Elix?"
I got no response, and fell to the ground, sobbing.
"I-I just wanna go home!"
A figure stood in the doorway, her perfect green eyes watching me.
She scooped me up, and took me with her.
A small albino neko followed us... -
Age 7
"Eclipse!"Solan cried, tackling me as I came back from the lake.
"Oof!"I giggled, hugging him.
Ever watched us, touching her stomach every so often. Invigero sat perched on her shoulder, cawing.
Inn worked furiously, scribbling spells down and earasing.
I then said "Ever. I know your not my mom. What if my real parents are-are out looking?!"
"Doubt it."Ever replied, and that struck a nerve. she didn't care..
I ran off, to spend the next year away from her. I didn't need her. Somewhere I had parents! Somewhere.... -
I sat by the lake, tossing rocks. Then I heard talking. I wandered over, to see a group of people...
I watched, then noticed one had spotted me.
He walked over, a weird but nice smile on his face. "Hi! Who are you?"
"E-eclipse."
"Pretty name. I'm Goku."
Pretty name....pretty name....pretty name...
Have I found it? I doubt it. Skyre said id die. I don't care though. Goku is my friend! Now till forever...
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Coooooool!
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I love the end. :')
You're damn awesome at writing Heph. You chose a good ending (like, you didn't go off into the other characters. You left sort of a cliff hanger. I seriously enjoy when a writer does that.)
You did the time span really well as well, you weren't just jumping around all over the place.
Very good. :D -
^_^ Thank you.
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Don't die
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I love it! :D
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