Help me write a story!
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Thread Topic: Help me write a story!
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(sure!)
Charlie grabbed her hand again, intertwining their fingers. Holli frowned. She stopped in her tracks. 'Charlie, what are you doing?' she asked, snapping a little.
'Well, I..' Charlie said. 'I know you like William, but..'
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Whatttt? I write a whole entire paragraph and it DELETED???? 😭😭😭
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Anyways.......
Holli looked genuinely confused but she knew what he might of said. "But wha-" she was cut off as Charlie kissed her on the cheek. Her neck rashes red as she punched him in the face. "Get off me you creep" she shouted punching him again.
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(It's a way of life, sorry 😂)
Charlie stumbled backwards, looking fazed. Holli's shout had woken William, and he stumbled sleepily towards the noise.
'What is wrong with you?!' Holli yelled.
'Nothing, you're the one who punched me!'
'You're the one who kissed me!'
William entered the clearing. 'What's going on?' he demanded, rubbing his eyes. -
William turned on Holli first
"Did he just say you punched him?"
Holli nodded. "Yeah, and I did, but William listen-"
Charlie cut her off. "I did nothing to her, I swear we were just talking and she suddenly attacked me" -
William frowned.
'Liar!' Holli shouted. Jason jerked awake a few metres from them. 'You know what you did! You-'
'I did nothing!' Charlie insisted.
William clenched his jaw, still looking at Holli. 'Holli, you're tired, you should probably get some rest,' he said softly. -
"I'm fine-" she insisted, but the look on William's face told her to listen and walk off.
(I dont know what to put) -
(me neither)
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(ooohh I like this a lot 😁 I read the entire thing Imma join if it's alright I loovvee writing I know some things about being on the run believe me...)
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(I'll take that as a yes... I am very impatient and you people are taking wwaayyyy too long)
"Holli what is it?" William looked confused.
"He...He-" was all she could get out before charlie shouted; "I didn't do anything!"
Holli lost it and screamed'; "YOU KISSED ME YOU CREEP!!" and stormed off.
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(Oh crap I meant to put this paragraph first lmao)
William looked at Holli and saw the anger and disgust in her eyes, curious he looked at charlie and saw a mixture of triumph, hurt, determination, and jealousy. Confused he finally gave into curiosity and started to ask Holli what was wrong. -
William turned to Charlie. Now he was the disgusted one. 'You did WHAT?!' he shouted.
Jason stumbled into he clearing tiredly. 'What's goin' on?' -
Nobody answered him.
Charlie sighed. "William, believe me she's a liar, she kissed me and I-"
William searched his brothers eyes hoping he would find something that would tell him the truth.
"Did she? Why would she punch you then?" He accused, his fists clenched. -
(@cheese maniac, wow I'm surprised you read the whole thing, so well done and thanks you seem to have understood the story quite quickly 😜)
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(Yes I love this story I really think it could be a book people would really enjoy it coming from a 13 year old who won a young writers certificate in 6th grade this book would definitely be loved<3)
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