Help me write a story!
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Thread Topic: Help me write a story!
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'Persuading how?' William snapped.
'Well...' Jason said, fiddling with his hands. 'Y'know..'
'What, threats?' William said, though hoped it wasn't what Jason was referring to, 'or just persuasive words?' -
"Let's go then, to save your wretched Holli" Jason snapped dryly.
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'Answer me!' William exclaimed, hurrying after him.
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Jason went blank. He ignored William the whole way up the path until William stopped him when they were near the hospital. "J, tell me now!" He insisted.
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'Trust me, you don't wanna know,' Jason snapped, pushing past William.
'So he is gonna threaten her!' William exclaimed, hurrying after the older boy. Jason didn't reply, so William sighed and assumed the answer was yes. -
(What? Is Sebastian threatining Holli or Jason, I'm so confused!!)
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(Charlie's might threaten Holli to be is gf, as far as I understand it-
Gimme a sec to reread) -
(yeah, Charlie may or may not turn out to be a creepy weirdo)
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(Okay, what about Sebastian?)
"J, what happened? TELL ME OR I'LL"
"You'll what?" There was an awkward silence between them. "Exactly, you can't do anything, there ain't anything you can do" he snapped using his usual slang. -
(he's the one we forgot about and left in the hospital for now apparent reason)
'Just tell me,' William whined, growing tired of Jason's stubborn behaviour. 'Maybe I can help.'
'You can't,' Jason huffed.
'Did something happen between you and your girlfriend?' William asked, putting way too much emphasis on "girlfriend". -
"Don't go on about her, just go to Holli. Charlies a creep!"
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William huffed. 'Fine.'
While all this was happening, Holli and Charlie sat in the alleyway, staring at each other. Holli stared at Charlie because she was angry with the deal he'd made with Sebastian, and Charlie stared at her because he was only just realising how beautiful she was.
Eventually, Holli looked away and leaned back, sighing. 'So what's this great plan of yours?' -
Holli gulped, “I-I,”
She fled to her best friend Savanna’s house. Holli’s heart racing rapidly, she knocked on the mahogany door. Savanna opened it with a smile on her face.
“Come in!” Savanna greeted warmly.
“Hi! Can I have a look in your family library? I’ve got to do a little research,” rushed Holli, her legs bouncing up and down like she was running a marathon. -
Whoops! I accidentally did that. I thought I was continuing the last comment on page 1.
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(Hi, STButterfly 👋
We're trying to stick to the plot, and "Savanna" doesn't fit the story. Would you care to rewrite it, or read some of our pages/paragraphs to get an idea?)
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