My OFFICAL story thread.
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Story one: Butterfly girl.
What the story is about: A girl who goes through struggles,then one day she turns in a fairy. This is about her exsperiences.
Chapters: 15
Chapter 1- Help me.
Elizabeth walks through the halls of her school with her head down, hoping that nobody notices her. Soon she reached class and settled her blue eyes at the board. Soon the whole class is in the class.
Soon the teacher walked in. She smiled sweetly and said,"Class get your books out and turn to page ten."So Elizabeth turns her book to page ten.
Soon the teacher said,"Who wants to read about the magical fairy?" Nobody raised their hand. The teacher said,"What about you Elizabeth?"
The students turned to face Elizabeth. Elizabeth said,"May I used the bathroom?" The teacher said,"You may. I guess I'll read then."
Elizabeth raced to the bathroom in a heartbeat. Once she got in there a couple of girls looked at her. They said,"Hey." Then they snickered.
Elizabeth tried to slowly get out of the bathroom, but the girls pulled her red hair. They laugh and started to beat her up.
Soon she yells,"HELP!" But they girls covered her mouth and started to beat her up some more. Soon the principal walks in, and she said,"Girls. Everyone that is beating up Elizabeth is suspended!" -
Raven_ NewbieChapter 2-The forest:
The girls groaned, and Elizabeth sighed. The principal took them to the office. Elizabeth got up and walked in the classroom.
Soon the nurse walked in. She said,"I'm the new nurse, Mrs.Yander. Now, where's Elizabeth?" Elizabeth walked over to her with her blonde hair in her face. She tripped and fell.
The students laughed at her. Mrs.Yander picked her up and took her to the office. She said,"So Elizabeth, how old are you?" Elizabeth said,"I'm 15, going to be 16 next week." Mrs.Yander examined her face. She said,"Happy early birthday." Elizabeth nodded her head.
The nurse said,"You'll be fine. Just have a bloody nose, black eye, and one tooth knocked out." Elizabeth said,"Okay." Soon the bell rang.
Elizabeth was sent home. As she was walking home, she saw a forest. It was huge, then she saw a butterfly. She chased it in the forest. It was new to her. She looked all around, soon she saw a lady who was beautiful. -
Raven_ NewbieChapter 3- The lady:
She silently walked to her. She said,"Hello. I'm Elizabeth. Who are you?" The lady looked down at her and put her hand on her head gently. She said,"I'm Queen Mortha. But you can call me Mortha, Elizabeth." Elizabeth smiled for the first time.
Soon Mortha spreaded Moth wings. Elizabeth touched one of them and widened her eyes, her mouth turned into a smile into a gasp.
She said,"What are you queen of?" Mortha said."Of the moths." Elizabeth soon walked off in horror. Mortha said,"I didn't mean to scare you."
Elizabeth said,"I'm going home." So she walked home slowly, once she opened the door she put her stuff in her room. She plopped on her bed and looked outside.
Soon she saw Mortha. She sighed. Mortha flew on the window. Elizabeth opened it and said."What?" -
Raven_ NewbieChapter 4- The message from Mortha:
Mortha said,"There's something important I should tell you. Tomorrow when you're hurt, come to me. But anyways, I should tell you the message now."
Elizabeth sighed and said,"Tell me." Mortha said,"Get your hair out of your face and look in my eyes first. This is secret." Elizabeth removed her hair from her face, and looked in her eyes. Mortha said,"Don't fall for the queen of liars. Her name is Lilly."
Elizabeth said,"Okay." Soon Mortha said,"You're so beautiful! I don't know what people see." Soon Mortha flew off into the forest. -
Raven_ NewbieChapter 5- The next day:
Elizabeth soon went downstairs quickly and grabbed an apple. She ignored her arguing parents and quickly ran upstairs.
She ate the apple as her supper, then she threw away the core.
She sighed and went to bed. The next morning she woke up and yawned. She quickly got ready for school and slowly walked to school. She thought,"Hell is everywhere." She said,"f--- it! Once I get home I'm going to plan another life away from this Hell!"
Soon she reached the school. She walked to her locker quickly and quickly went in class. The students sat there and gazed upon their crushes or lovers. She sighed, soon the teacher said,"Today we're going to learn more about fairies."
The teacher started to teach, soon the kid from behind Elizabeth pulled her hair and started to kick her ankle. She said,"Mrs.Jinkle. May I go to the office?"
The teacher said,"Sure." Elizabeth ran to the office and said,"May I go home? I got a doctor appointment." The principal said,"Sure." Elizabeth hates lying so she said,"Truth is, I have to plan to move. I'm picked on by everyone and my parents do nothing but argue."
The principal said,"Go ahead, go on. I understand."
Elizabeth walked home, then Mortha stopped her in the middle of the walk. Mortha said,"I heard what you said this morning." Mortha grabbed her and flew into the forest. -
Raven_ NewbieChapter 6- The secret:
Elizabeth screamed and looked up. She said,"Don't drop me Mortha!" Mortha said,"I won't darling." Soon she put her down on the ground softly. Elizabeth rested on a tree and spitted on her notebook.
She thought,"I won't need it. I'm leaving that school, possibly home to. Mom and Dad won't notice." Mortha smiled and said,"Follow me." Elizabeth followed her to the river.
Mortha soon said,"Let me see your back Elizabeth. Take off that clothing item," Elizabeth said,"Why?" Mortha said,"You'll see." Elizabeth sighed and took off her shirt. Soon she felt weird. Mortha smiled sweetly.
Elizabeth said,"What is it?" Mortha said,"You have wings. Butterfly wings!" Elizabeth looked behind her and saw the wings.
She widened her eyes and saw that her bra was holding the wings down. Mortha quickly flew and made an outfit for Elizabeth.
Elizabeth took off her clothes behind a tree and put on the outfit. Mortha said,"Follow me again!"
Elizabeth soon flew with Mortha to Mortha's throne. Everything in the forest came alive and followed them. Mortha said,"This is Elizabeth. She has butterfly wings, because she's queen of the butterflies! We should see if we can make her a reception!" -
Raven_ NewbieChapter 7- The reception:
The forest cheered. So Mortha stood up and quickly grabbed a book, along with a ring and crown.
Elizabeth was confused. Soon she stood up in front of Mortha. Mortha said,"Do you, Elizabeth, promise to serve your duties as queen? Do you swear upon this kingdom that you'll never give your throne to soneone else until the day you die, and have your will to give it to your daughter?"
Elizabeth said,"Yes I promise to serve my duties. I do swear upon this kingdom that I won't give the throne away, until I have died, then I'll give it to my future daughter." Mortha nodded her head. Elizabeth bowed down.
Mortha said,"Queen Elizabeth is now queen of the butterflies. We're going to honor her until all of us die. Congratulations Elizabeth, I now pronounce you queen, of all butterflies!"
Elizabeth stopped bowing once Mortha put the crown on her head. The whole forest cheered. -
Raven_ NewbieChapter 8- Lessons by Mortha:
Elizabeth smiled for the first time today. The butterflies came and covered her arms up. One butterfly said,"Hello Elizabeth. Welcome as queen."
Elizabeth said,"Thank you. I'm honored to be the queen of butterflies." The butterflies flew away. Mortha said,"Come with me, if you want to." Elizabeth followed Mortha.
Mortha said,"Here's a few lessons I've learned at the first minute I learned as queen. Never attack your people, bug, etc. Never kill. Never cheat. Never smoke. Never drink. Be yourself, and never cut."
Elizabeth said,"Okay." Soon they flew to Elizabeth's throne. Elizabeth sat down on the throne and smiled. Her first time ever she felt happy, and not hated. -
Raven_ NewbieChapter 9-Love in the air:
Mortha said,"I'm going to go now. You got this now." Elizabeth flew in the air and looked down. Soon she saw the king of crows. She flew down to him.
He saw her and spreaded his crow wings. He said,"Hello Elizabeth." Elizabeth said,"Hello, Craly." He smiled and ran a hand through his black hair, and looked at her with his green eyes.
She said,"This forest sure is big." Craly said,"Yep." Elizabeth soon started to like him. Craly soon poked Elizabeth and said,"Tag you're it." Elizabeth spreaded her wings, Craly flew. Elizabeth went after Craly.
Soon Craly flew on the ground and sat on a log. Elizabeth said,"You know logs are the body of a dead tree, right?" Craly said,"Yeah." Elizabeth sat next to him.
Craly wrapped his arm around her and held her close. Elizabeth rested her head on his chest. -
Raven_ NewbieChapter 9- Confessions:
Craly looked down at Elizabeth. He thought,"How precious. This little girl is the most prettiest thing I've ever seen. I want her to be mine FOREVER." Soon Elizabeth said,"Can I tell you something?"
Craly said,"Sure. Anything." Elizabeth said,"I really like you. I had a hard life, my parents did nothing but argue,and I didn't have any friends." Craly said,"Oh my God. I'm so sorry Elizabeth. Also, I like you to."
They both blushed and soon the sun started to set.
Craly said,"We should get going." Elizabeth said,"Yeah we should...but I don't want to. Oh well, bye." They soon went to their chambers and slept for the night. -
Raven_ NewbieOops, I meant Chapter 10.)
Chapter 11-The first kiss:
Craly woke up the next morning, so did Elizabeth. Elizabeth went out and controlled all of the butterflies. While she was flying, she accendently bumped into Craly.
Craly fell on the ground with Elizabeth on top of him. She quickly got up and said,"Sorry." Craly said,"It's fine darling. It'll be forgotten if you go to the river with me tonight." Elizabeth said,"Okay." Soon the flew off.
Craly controlled all of the crows. Soon the sun setted.
Craly met Elizabeth at the pond. Soon Craly said,"Hello there darling." Elizabeth said,"Hello."
Then they looked in each other's eyes, not saying anything. Soon Craly leaned in and kissed her, she kissed back thinking,"Wow. Be mine Craly." Craly soon said,"I'm sorry about that!"
Elizabeth said,"It's okay." -
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Raven_ NewbieMay you please not post in here?)
Chapter 12- The death of Craly:
Craly said,"Are you sure?" Elizabeth said,"I'm sure." Then they kissed again. Then Mortha came. She said,"So cute. But it's sad."
Elizabeth said,"What's sad Mortha?" Mortha said,"A crow and a butterfly can't be together. Or else the baby will come out as half butterfly, half crow. Wich creates a black winged butterfly."
Craly soon stood up. He said,"She's kind of right, sorry Elizabeth." Elizabeth said,"But I love Craly! I love you Craly!" She had tears in her eyes, soon the sun rose up. A hunter soon shot Craly. Craly fell on the ground bleeding.
Elizabeth cried and ran to Craly's body. Craly said,"Goodbye baby. I love you." Soon he died.
Craly cried and put his arm around her. She cried in him. -
Raven_ NewbieChapter 15- The funeral:
Mortha said,"My child. Love is the most dangerous thing in the world. It can break your heart, it can make you cry." Elizabeth sighed and stopped crying. She said,"I know Mortha. He treated me like a women, not like an ugly son of a b----, or a mistake." She flew off.
Mortha went after her and said,"I want to show you something. Something big." They flew down to the graveyard. She pointed out to one, she said,"My husband. He died a long time ago, he was smashed." Elizabeth said,"Wow, sorry for your lost."
Then a bell was rung. It was the bell of death, it started to rain. Elizabeth flew to her kingdom. She hugged her knees and cried. A butterfly said,"What's wrong?"
Elizabeth regonized the butterfly. She said,"It's nothing Jerry. Just do what you do best."
The butterfly said,"I know you're sad. I can feel your heart breaking." She smiled a fake smile and said,"May you please go?" She spreaded her wings.
She looked at them again. She noticed something different. They were bigger than usual. She looked at them and looked at Jerry. Jerry said,"Fine, I'll go." -
Raven_ NewbieOops, I mean Chapter 13)
Chapter 14- The next day:
Elizabeth fell asleep crying. The next morning she woke up and went out. She flew out to the graveyard, she saw Craly's grave. She went up to it and sat next to it. She cried and then the King of Fish came by.
He said,"What's wrong?" Elizabeth spreaded her wings, she said,"Nothing.It's just that I'm grieving. It's funny how you love someone..then you..." She paused.
The fish king said,"Oh I forgot to mention. My name is Fred," Elizabeth said,"Nice to meet you."
She stood up and toched Fred's gills. She flew off quickly and then she started to write a note. She flew, then a jar was put around her.
A kid had caught her, the kid put her in the house. He got a needle ready. She was so scared.
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