My OFFICAL story thread.
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Raven_ NewbieChapter 15- The death of Elizabeth:
The kid got Elizabeth out of the jar. He smiled and put her in another jar with two mothballs.
She couldn't handle the smell, she coughed and coughed, then she fell on her knees.
She played dead, then the kid put her against some sort of paper, she opened her eyes. She thought,"So this is the land of the giants? Eh." Then the kid put a needle in her.
She started to bleed, she tried to get the needle out, then the kid put her in a picture frame. She couldn't breathe, then she died. -
Raven_ NewbieStory: Romeo and Juliet.
Plot: A girl who's a biker and a guy who's a hippie who fell in love.
Chapters: 10
Chapter 1- The party:
Once there was two people who were different. One was a hippie, the other was a biker. Juliet who was sixteen, and Romeo who was eighteen. Then a party was going on one night.
Romeo and Juliet went to the party. while Juliet was hanging out with the bikers, Romeo accendently bumped into Juliet. Juliet looked at him with her blue eyes. He said,"I'm sorry."
He looked at her with his green eyes. Juliet curled her finger around her brown hair and said,"It's okay."
Then the bikers got up and said,"Hey hippie! Beat it or beat up!" Romeo looked at them, he said,"Make love, not cuts man."
Juliet grabbed his hand for a second and said,"I'm Juliet. Nice blonde curls." Romeo said,"I'm Romeo. Nice to meet you." Romeo smiled and said,"I gotta' go before these guys beat up the peace. Peace man." Then he walked off. -
Raven_ NewbieChapter 2- The next day:
The bikers laughed. They said,"We know the look y'all gave each other. You have no chance with him." They laughed even harder. Juliet rolled her eyes and said,"Watch me. b----es." Then she got up and she went to Romeo.
Romeo said."Hey man." He looked in her blue eyes. She said,"Hey dude." She looked back in his green eyes. Romeo flipped his hair, then he said,"So. You're a biker eh?" Juliet nodded her head, she punched him playfully. Soon the party was over.
She said,"So Romeo. Need a lift?" He said,"No man. I can just walk. Thanks for asking man." Everyone left.
Juliet hopped on her bike and drove home. She went inside and grabbed a Coke. She sat down and sighed.
Romeo walked home then the hippie van picked him up. He said,"Thanks man." The driver said,"Hey man. Can you grab me the Coke please?" Romeo said,"Here man." Then he gave it to him.
Romeo got home and walked in. He put on a CD and then sat on the floor. He grabbed the peacesighn around his neck and thought of Juliet.
The next day Romeo went to school, Juliet did to. She parked her bike and saw Romeo. Romeo walked over to her and said,"Hey man." She said,"Hey." She got up and walked up to Romeo. Romeo said,"Sup man?" She said,"Nothing but class. Bye." She smirked and thought,"Nothing but the open road." -
Raven_ NewbieChapter 3- Romeo saves the day:
Romeo said,"Bye." Then he walked to class. Juliet saw Romeo, she said,"Why do I care about him? When I'm with him I feel, different. I feel safe, excited, oh lord I'm in love."
She sat in front of Romeo and whispered,"Hey." Romeo whispered,"Hey man." Juliet smiled.
Once the bell rung the teacher started to teach. Juliet drawed a sketch of Romeo and her being togethered. Romeo just payed attention to Juliet. Soon Juliet wrote the words."Even though a hippie and a biker can't be together, I really like you."
She blushed and folded it. Once the bell rung to dismiss class Juliet got up, soon she tripped. Everyone just ignored, except for Romeo. Romeo helped Juliet up. Juliet said,"Thanks." She walked off and quickly went to Romeo's locker. Romeo walked to his locker and said,"Hey man." -
Raven_ NewbieChapter 4- The note:
She said,"Hey there Romeo." Romeo opened his locker up a little bit. He said,"What's up man?" Juliet blushed and handed him the note. He grabbed it and read it. Romeo smiled and put the note in his pocket. He said,"I like you to Juliet."
Juliet blushed and said,"I gotta' go. Bye." Juliet ran out of the school and ditched class. She hopped on her bike and soon she saw Romeo behind her.
He said,"Take me with you man." She said,"Hop on." Romeo smiled and hopped on the bike. She smiled and started to drive. -
Raven_ NewbieChapter 5-Riding:
Romeo held on to Juliet, Juliet drove her motorbike. Then she went to get some gas. Then she drove again. She yelled,"Isn't this fun Romeo?" Romeo said,"I don't know man." Juliet giggled, soon she stopped to get a bottle of water. They drove again.
Romeo soon rested his head in Juliet's shoulder. Juliet stopped at a meadow.
She grabbed Romeo's hand and climbed up the hill. She sat down and smiled.
Romeo sat next to her and wrapped his arm around her. Juliet scooted closer to Romeo, Romeo held her closer and smiled. Juliet said,"So Hippy, why do you like me?"
Romeo said,"Who wouldn't? You're awesome, lovable, humorous, and very adorable. My love for you is as strong as your pride in biking." -
Chapter 6: The promise:
Juliet giggled and kissed his cheek. Romeo blushed and smiled wider. He said,"I wish more people think that love has no stereotype. It's just a label man, but meh. As long I got you by my side and I'm with you the world doesn't matter." Juliet put her head in his chest.
Romeo smiled and kissed the top of her head. Juliet said,"Romeo?" Romeo said,"Yes?" She got up and looked him in the eyes. She said,"Please promise me that you'll be with me until I die? Until the world ends?" Romeo looked in her eyes and kissed her.
She kissed back and blushed. He said,"I promise baby. Now promise me please." Juliet said,"I'm promise darling."
Romeo hugged her. Juliet hugged back and smiled. She punched him playfully and ran. He ran after her. She giggled, soon Romeo caught her in his arms and rolled down the hill. He wrapped his legs around her as well. She said,"Weee." She laughed as they rolled down the hill. -
Chapter 7- The secret is out:
Soon Juliet got on her bike, Romeo jumped on as well. Juliet drived, then she reached her place. She smiled and grabbed Romeo's hand. She said,"I live alone, with my stereo." She giggled and opened the door. Romeo held her hand as they walked in. She said,"Take a seat." Romeo sat on her couch. She went in the kitchen.
She came out of the kitchen with two cokes. She smiled and handed him one. She sat next to him and smiled. Romeo said,"This place is so big. My house has only a bed and a rug. I live all alone with my stereo as well." They both giggled and opened their Cokes. Soon they were cracking jokes and laughing away. Soon Romeo said,"I got to go honey. Bye." Juliet said,"Bye."
The next morning Romeo and woke up and went to school. Soon Juliet held Romeo's hand and walked in the school. Soon she realized everyone was staring with their mouths gasping. Juliet sighed and hugged him. Romeo hugged back confused. Soon the whole school was laughing and making fun of it. -
Chapter 8-Strangle:
Even their friends. They just laughed and joked. A guy went up to Juliet and pushed her against a locker. He said,"I can treat you so much better than that loser." Juliet fluttered her eyes and he put her hand on his neck.
He smiled and tried to lean in for a kiss. Soon she tightened her fingers around his neck and smiled. He started to gag and turn red. She pushed him against another set of lockers.
She used both of her hands and started to strangle him. He turned purple, he spitted out,"Let me go. You're going to be with me and your going to like it!" Romeo soon walked in the hallway. He saw Juliet and widened his eyes. Juliet said,"I'm not going to be yours! And I never will." She soon spotted Romeo.
Romeo pulled her hands away from him and he kissed her fingers. She looked down and let her hair cover her face. Romeo pulled her outside and held her in his arms. Soon they went to Juliet's bike. -
Chapter 9- Movin',Ridin', Gone:
Juliet drove to the meadow they were last time. They both climbed it. Once they got on top they sat down. Romeo said,"Juliet." She said,"Yes?" Romeo said,"Why were you strangling that guy?" Juliet said,"He was saying that I would be better with him, but I stood up for us and strangled him. To be more fair, he was hitting on me." Romeo nodded his head and he held her close. He said,"Okay. I was confused and worried at first," Juliet rested her head in his chest. He said,"What about we get out of town?"
Juliet said,"Are you serious?" Romeo said,"Yes." Juliet grabbed him and rolled down the hill. At the bottom Juliet fell on top of Romeo. She giggled and said,"Okay."
They quickly hopped on the bike and Juliet drove away. Soon they found a house in the middoe of nowhere and it had no town. They smiled and went inside. -
Chapter 10- Wedding:
They lived in the house, then Romeo got on his knee. Juliet looked down at him. He said,"Juliet, I know a biker and a hippie can't be together and all, but I need you. So I ask you with all my heart, a very important question." He pulled out a ring. He said."Will you be my girl and make me happy by marrying me?"
Juliet smiled. She had tears streaming down her cheeks. She said,"Oh Romeo. Thou art Romeo, it's a yes. I'll marry you. It'll make the colors brighter, the stars prettier, the sun warmer, and my heart healed." Romeo smiled and put the ring on her finger. He got up and hugged her. She hugged back crying tears of happier.
Then they stopped hugging and made plans instantly. Soon they found a church, and she found new friends. They helped her pick out a dress. Along with new high-heel boots. Soon the special day came.
They both lived happily ever after. -
Story:Dead man
Plot:A woman who's father died when she was three. Soon something big happens
Chapters:8
Chapter 1-The story:
One day Scarlet was walking to the toy store with her father. Her father said,"Scarlet, one day,you'll reach the sun, and I will to. We sleep forever on that one day, but, remember me once that day comes." She was confused, she said,"What do you mean Daddy?"
Her father said."Just remember me when I'm gone." Soon Scarlet took her dad's hand. He smiled at her and kept walking her to the store. Once they reached to the store, Scarlet grabbed a teddy bear. Her father smiled and bought it fir her. Once they walked out of the store, her dad said,"People will be gone before you know it."
She said,"Okay." He smiled, soon eventually a guy tripped the man over, took all his money, and took him away. Scarlet screamed and yelled,"NO STOP IT. DAAAAD. NO, DON'T." Soon he was gone. Once she got home she ran in her Mom's arms.
Her mom hugged her tight. She knew instantly what happened. She cried with Scarlet and held her tight. Scarlet kept crying and squeezed the teddy bear with one of her hands. -
Chapter 2-Memories:
Now Scarlet's grown, but has many memories. She still doesn't know what happened to her dad. Mom was there since her dad was gone. She hates that she remembers that memory. They couldn't even find him. Now she plays the violin in a jazz band.
Soon she visited her mom with a smile. Her mom said,"Hey darling." Scarlet Saud,"Hey." Her mom smiled. She handed her a plate of cookies. Scarlet said,"Thanks." Her mom smiled,"So your birthday 's tomorrow, right?"
Scarlet nodded her head. She said,"Turning nineteen." Her mom sighed and said,"I remember when you were turning three your dad gave you that violin." Scarlet Said,"Yep. I still play that violin."
Her mom sighed again. She had a feeling she had something to say. Scarlet said,"I still can't believe the violin is about to be sixteen years old." Her mom smiled and said,"Same here darling."
She sighed and ate a cookie. Her mother looked at the teddy bear Scarlet's dad gave her. She sighed and Saud,"Remember that one time I helped you pick up your violin because you fell off the porch?"
Scarlet nodded her head and ate another cookie. Her mom sighed and put her fingers on Scarlet's. She said,"Your fingers are rigged and bony." Scarlet smiled and said,"I better get to leaving, I can't be late for practice. Bye Mom, love you." Then she walked to practice. -
Chapter 3-The note:
Once she reached practice, the band was getting ready. She grabbed her violin and sighed. Soon they started to practice. She smiled and let the rhythm touch her heart. Soon practice was over. They put up their instruments.
The saxophonist, Garry, said,"Hey Scarlet." Scarlet said,"Hey Garry." Garry smiled and said,"You look a little down." Scarlet forced a smile on her face. She Saud,"I'm just tired." Garry nodded his head and said,"Okay."
Scarlet walked to her house. She opened the door and her roommate, Saphire, was sitting on the couch. Scarlet put up her violin and grabbed a soda. Saphire said,"Scarlet. Fanmail came in the mail for you." Scarlet thought,"For me?" Saphire handed her the mail.
Scarlet smiled. She opened it, and opened the letter. It read,"Dear Scarlet, I'm such a huge fan!! You see, I have cancer, and once I heard I did. I listened to one if your songs. You rock at violin. Love, Drew."
She smiled and put the note in her room. She put it next to her favorite teddy bear. The one her father gave her before TGAT one day. She had always wondered what happened to him. -
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Chapter 4-Stories told:
Saphire said,"So. Any plans?" Scarlet said, "Just practice the violin." Saphire walked in the room and said,"No tours this month?" Scarlet said,"Yeah." Saphire said,"I've never seen the band. How many are in it?" Scarlet said,"There's five of us."
Saphire nodded her head. Scarlet looked at her. Saphire said,"The names of people in it?" Scarlet said,"Henry, as saxophone. David, as flute. Gabvy, as clarinet. Griffin, as piano. And me, Scarlet, as violin."
Saphire nodded her head. She walked into the guest room. Thing is, it's a two-room house. She shares a room with Saphire. She doesn't mind it, sometimes she wish she could move out. But, she loves her to much to leave her alone. At least they get their own beds.
Scarlet picked up her violin and started to practice. Saphire walked in and played on her bed. Scarlet continued to practice her violin. She loves the way the rhythm feels.
After she practiced she cooked some oatmeal, ate it, and went to bed. The next morning she woke up. It was her birthday. She jogged to her Mom's and knocked on the door. Her mom welcomed her in and hugged her. She hugged back. Her mother gave her a store bought cake and said,"Happy birthday." She put the cake on the table and said,"Thanks Mom. Mind if I ask an important question?"
Her mom said,"Anything!" Scarlet said,"What happened to Dad?" Her mom said,"Truth is, he was kidnapped by his enemies. They took him to a place and killed him. They sliced him up in pieces. He was never seen again. They couldn't find ANY if his body," Scarlet widened her eyes in shock.
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