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Chapter 9- Mom knows:
"Hey Gloria. Who's this and why are you hugging him?" Her mom said. "Mom. This is Ash, he's my crush or lover. I don't know." Gloria said. Ash said,"We can be lovers." Her mom said,"Okay. Do you got somebody to go to the 'Woods in the moonlight'?" Gloria said,"Yes. Ash is my date." Her mom nodded her head. "Well, your father is about to be home." Her mom said. Gloria closed her eyes and rested her head on Ash's shoulder. "I'll leave you two alone." She said. She walked back in the house. Gloria said,"I'm going to go. Bye." Ash said,"Nuuuu. Fine." They laughed and let go of each other. -
Chapter 10-The confessions:
Ash walked home. Gloria walked in her house and then adjusted her headphones. Soon Ash's dad said, "Hey son. I saw you hugging somrone." Ash said, "That's Gloria. She's my girl." Soon Gloria's dad walked in the house. He said, "Hey Honey. Hey Gloria." Gloria just shrugged and walked out the house. Ash saw her and ran her way. Once they were together Ash pulled her to the forest. Gloria went along with it. Soon they stopped once they found a spot. Ash sat down and put her on his lap. Gloria said, "So. Who else knows about us other than my mom?" Ash said, "My dad. That's all." Gloria smiled, then Ash started to kiss her cheeks. Gloria blushed. Ash stopped. He said, "I have something to say." Gloria said, "What?" Ash said, "I must confess that my world was sadder without you. My mom died giving birth to me. My dad is now a lawyer. Soon my brother died. Dad was harsher on me. Then I found you." Gloria blushed harder and kissed his knuckles. -
Chapter 11- Whispers:
Ash blushed. He whispered, "Baby girl." Gloria looked up and said, "Yes?" Ash slid closer to her. He wrapped his arms around her. Then he whispered, "Stay with me forever. Life was terriboe until I found you." Gloria kissed his cheek. Then she whispered, "We're to young for that baby. But, I hope you're with me until the day I die." Ash then grabbed her hand. He whispered, "I hope so to." Then the wind started to rustle through the trees. Ash rubbed Gloria's arms and whispered, "I love you." Gloria smiled and whispered, "I love you to." But she was thinking,'WHY?' -
Chapter 12- By my side:
Ash smiled. Gloria said, "I think I have to go." Ash said,"Nuuu!" Then he grabbed unto her harder. She just smiled. Ash said,"You like it when I grab your arms like this. Do you?" Gloria nodded her head. Ash kissed her chin. Then they got up. Soon the sunset cane. Gloria layed on the porch. Then she saw Ash's shadow. She grinned. Ash slowly layed by her side and held on to her. Soon Gloria's dad came. He said, "Gloria. Who is this?" Gloria whispered, "Damnit." Ash kissed her ear. Gloria said,"D-dad this is Ash. H-he's m-my b-b-boyfreind." His dad nodded her head. He said,"Okay. Hurt her and mess with me, you hear me Ash?" Gloria widened her eyes. Usaully he would send him home. Ash nodded his head and stroked Gloria's hair smoothly with his fingers. -
Chapter 13- Dancing in the moonlight:
Gloria's dad walked to the car. Gloria smiled and lightly pulled his hand on her chest. He noticed what she was doing. He said, "I love you." Soon Gloria's dad started the car. Gloria said,"I love you to." Ash smiled and sat up. He pulled her to his side. Soon her dad drove away. Soon Gloria stood up. She pulled him to the moonlight. Ash soon blushed. He said, "What are you-?" Gloria cut him off. She said, "Close your lips and dance." Ash started to dance with her. She danced with him. He kissed het cheek and stopped blushing. They danced and danced. -
^can I rewrite this in my own way? it's still your s--- but I want to "revise" it, I guess
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Sure. Please don't post...)
Chapter 14- The fall:
Soon Gloria said, "I'm going home." She pulled away from his arms gently and walked home. Ash nodded his head and went home. He soon figured out that he was really in love. He walked in his house with a smile on his face. Soon a song he wrote came in his head, 'Oh Lord have mercy. I fell for it. I fell in love. Oooh lord look at her face. So heavenly.' He sung it. Then his dad said,"Hey son." Ash nodded his head abd ran to his room. He sat on his bed and thought about life. But, his memories were blocked. Because the song and Gloria's face was all in his head. He did fall in love. -
Chapter 15- Shopping:
Gloria walked in the house and went online. She had to find a dress by Friday, wich is tomorrow. She clicked and clicked until her fingers hurt.She thought,'It's hopeless.' Then she sighed and punched the couch. She got back to it and found a dress. She smiled and clicked on it. It was going to be delivered tomorrow. She felt giddy inside and started to dance around. Her dad walked in the house and froze. He said,"Hey." Gloria turned around and froze. She sighed and then her dad walked in the house. She soon closed the computer and sat down. -
Chapter 16- Songs of the heart:
Her dad shrugged and went to her mom. Gloria sighed and walked in her room with her laptop. She layed the laptop on her desk and started to put her dirty clothes in the laundry basket. She sang,"Your love is a drug. It helps me get well. It makes me feel better. Just be there if I need you. Then our love is stronger each day. If love was easy it wouldn't be called love." Then she soon heard a noise. She thought,'It came from the wondow.' She went to the window and opened it. She saw Ash in the fog. She smiled and dropped the basket on the floor. -
Chapter 17: The kiss:
Ash smiled and then looked up at her. He said,"Come down here girl. Let the my love go to your heart." Gloria climbed on the window sill and jumped. Ash quickly caught her once she almost reached the ground. Ash said,"I love you princess." Gloria soon put her lips on his. She started to kiss him and smiled a little. He kissed back and wrapped his tongue around her tounge. Gloria felt it and wrapped hers with his. They stopped kissing once they saw a shadow over them. -
Chapter 18-The runaway:
It was Gloria's dad. She looked up at him. He smiled and closed the window and locked it. Gloria sighed and got out of Ash's arm. She ran to the front yard and tested it. He locked that to. Ash tugged her arm and took her home with him. Gloria said,"I guess I can stay here for a little while." Soon Ash's dad came down the stairs. He said,"Hello. Ash, who is this angel?" Gloria blushed. Ash said,"She's my girlfriend. She MY angel and her name is Gloria." Ash's dad looked at him. He said,"Really?" Gloria said,"Yes. We're going to 'Woods in Moonlight' together tomorrow night." His dad stopped looking at them. He said,"Well. I'll let you to be. I got paperwork to do." Then he walked up the stairs. Once Ash heard the door close he said,"Gloria live with me." Gloria nodded her head and said,"Okay." -
Chapter 19-The 'Woods in the Moonlight':
Soon Ash went to bed. Gloria snuggled Ash and fell asleep with him. Soon Gloria woke up with Ash gone 'It's Friday.' She thought. She widened her eyes and quickly got out of the bed. She saw Ash holding a box. He said,"Hey Gloria. This was for you." Gloria sighed out of relief and grabbed the box. She put it down and hugged Ash. She said,"Thank you." Ash hugged back and said,"You're welcome. Love you princess." Gloria smiled and said,"Love you to." Adh kissed her and she kissed back. Soon they stopped and Gloria pulled the dress out of the box. It was a blue dress with flowers on the sleeves. She smiled and kissed Ash's cheek. Soon Ash got his outfit. A pair of bluejeans with a pair of Nikes. Also a blue shirt and a leather jacket. They got ready and soon quickly walked to the forest. Soon other people came in the forest, then the dance started. Ash grabbed Gloria and pulled her close. She felt his heartbeat. She smiled and danced with him. They danced until Ash started to get tired. Soon the dance ended and people were fileing out of the woods. -
Chapter 20- The end:
Ash and Gloria walked home. Soon they realize the people of the town were worried. Soon Gloria lived with Ash forever. Ash became a Dancer and Gloria became a Youtuber. Then one night Ash came home and found Gloria dead on the couch. He worried and did CPR on her. She was 93. Ash was 98. He decided that she's dead forever, so he lived alone until he died.
THE END -
What an ending. A true masterpiece in every sense of the word. Truly, Shakespeare wept.
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