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14- The end:
Once we got home Dad went to sleep. I sneaked a knife and slitted my vain. I left a little note. Soon I saw Dad wake up. "Honey." He said with note in his hand. "Don't die on me please. You're the only thing I have left." He said. I cryed a little and soon fell. "Goodbye. I love you Dad." Soon I saw my world slowly fading. I saw Dad crying. Soon he went to my side. Then I died. -
Finished2016 NewbieThat's awful!
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Finished2016 NewbieYou okay?
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Finished2016 NewbieSorry... no posting. My bad.
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xD It's just a story. I almost cried.)
Story- Lonely love
Chapter 1- The newboy:
Gloria sighed as she got up. "Normal day. Normal life. So why do I feel so brand new?" She said. Soon she put on some shorts. "First day of summer break." She said. She smiled and put on a tank top. She smiled. "Yeah! Now I can dance in every club I can!" She said. She put her headphones on her neck. Soon she went out. She soon saw a new face. She blushed and walked his way. He saw me coming. He had on a black pair of nikes with a pair of skinny jeans. Also a black Ed Sheeran shirt and a pair of drumsticks in his pocket. Then I noticed his headphones. He said, "Hello I'm Ash.You are?" I smiled, "My name is Gloria." -
Chapter 2- Rain:
He smiled. "That's prety." Ash said. Soon it started to rain. "Well, we can maybe hangout sometime." Gloria said. Ash said, "You're cold are you?" Gloria blushed. "Yep." She said. Ash took off his shirt. "Take this." He said. Gloria blushed and put it on. It was warm to her. "You sure?" She said. Ash nodded. Then he said, "It looks pretty on your beautiful self." Gloria said, "Thanks. I need to go." Then she walked home. -
Chapter 4- Confession:
Ash waved at her. 'I really like her.' he thought. 'But she's way out of my league!' he thought. Gloria reached home and went in. She hugged herself. 'God I like him. But he's to hot to notice me.' She thought. Then her mom said, "Hey honey. Where did you get that shirt?" Gloria blushed. "There's this new guy in town. I really like him and then it started to rain. Then he asked me if I was cold then he took off his shirt and gave it to me." Her mom nodded. "Mhm. Gloria, do you know what sighn that is?" Gloria said, "No." Her mom smiled, "He likes you to!" Gloria had a shock look on her face. "I, umm...., wow. We could be like lovers?" Gloria's mom nodded. Gloria smiled and plopped on the couch. -
Chapter 5- Words:
Soon it stopped raining. Gloria went out the house and saw Ash. 'So dreamy.' She thought. She shook her head. 'Play it cool Gloria.' She thought. Ash saw Gloria. 'What an angel.' He thought. "Play it cool Ash." He whispered. Ash walked up to Gloria. "Hey. Such a beautiful angel." Ash said. Soon he realized what he said. He blushed. Gloria half-smiled. "Thanks?" She said. "I, ummm.... Let's hangout." He said. -
Chapter 6- The first hangout:
Gloria nodded. Ash grabbed her hand. "So I heard that there is this dance this Friday in the forest. Do you want to come?" Ash said. Gloria adjusted her headphones. "They have a dance there every year. It's called, 'Woods in the moonlight'. I'll think about it though." She said. Gloria held his hand. They both blushed and walked down to the park. Ash put her in the swing. Then pushed her. "Really?" She said. They lauged and Gloria jumped out of it. Then she fell on the concrete. "OWWWW!" Ahe yelled. -
Gloria yelled that)
Chapter 6- The romance:
Ash ran to Gloria. "You okay?" He said. Gloria got up. "I'm fine." She said. Ash rolled his eyes and grabbed Gloria's arm. Gloria wrapped her arm around him. " I like you." Ash blurted. Gloria blushed. "I like you to..." Ash smiled and blushed. -
Chapter 7- The joy:
Gloria blushed as well. Ash said,"Are you sure you're okay?" Gloria nodded. "I'm not convinced." Ash said. He gave the suspicios look. Gloria laughed and ran. Ash ran after her and caught her. He picked her up and carried Gloria home. "Let me go." She protested. Ash said,"No." Gloria crossed her arms. -
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Chapter 8- The choice:
Ash put her in front of her house. "There." He said. Gloria smiled. Ash said,"What? Why are you smiling?" Gloria said," I'll go with you to the 'Woods in the midnight'. " Ash smiled. He was overjoyed. "Okay." He said. Gloria got up and hugged him. Ash hugged back. 'God I love this.' Gloria thought. "I don't want to let you go." Ash said in a whisper. Then Gloria's mom walked out of the house. -
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