7 Little Tree's Story Thread.
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Thread Topic: 7 Little Tree's Story Thread.
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So, here it is, my official story/writing thread.
This, children is where my stories will be stored.
Just like a bookshelf I must say.
The stories that I write here are completely made up, and I am not copying anyone, but if content of one of my stories happens to have similar things in to another story here, I admit it will be complete, utter coincidence. Nothing more.
If you wish to magpie some of my story ideas, you must ask me first.
And every story that I create, I will plan first on this thread then I'll write it up in
full format.
And if you wish to ask me for a story request, then feel free to do so, as I love any challenge to do with story writing!
Thanks you for reading this.
PS~ Anyone may enter to critique on my stories so far, but no spiteful comments please.
I may do a story series, of just random little stories that pop into my head.
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*Or just random little stories that pop into my head.
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Character plans for story I will make soon.
Main Character:
Name: Ella
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Looks: Mid-length dark brown hair, brown eyes, tan skin, average height.
Species: Shapeshifter, but no one knows except her.
Personality: Quiet, secretive, easily angered by people. -
Name: Laura
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Looks: Long waist-length blonde hair, blue eyes with hints of green, caramel colored skin, smallish height.
Species: Also a shapeshifter, but she doesn't even know.
Personality: Kind, excitable, rarely becomes angry, sociable. -
That's all for now, I will do more later.
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One more thing:
Please critique on my character descriptions if you wish to, but no mean, spiteful comments please! -
This is part of a warrior cat story I made
Prologue
The rain lashed down like small pellets coming from the sky, the thunder crashed around in the dark, menacing clouds that loomed over everything. The two cats prowled through the forest, their shadows illuminated by the lightning that flashed brightly in the sky. One of the cats was a pale ginger tom, who had a ragged torn ear from when there had been a battle between the Clans, he had been attacked by one of the enemy cats. The other cat, who was much more well groomed than the first cat, was a sleek black and white she-cat. She looked as if she was a kittypet, a cat who was looked after and given a home by it's Twoleg owners. But she was actually a forest cat, she had been no where near Twolegs.
The two cats headed for a small cave that was shielded by a clump of bracken. The she-cat seemed to move faster than the tom, maybe she was younger than him, or maybe she was just agile. She led the way up until both of them reached the cave entrance. It was one big gaping hole, that looked as it would happily swallow any cat who dared enter the dark cave.
Both of the cats slowed down when they arrived at the entrance, it was as if something had deliberately slowed them down, or maybe they were just hesitant about entering. Or maybe there was just something about the cave that was eerie, and no cat had ever dared set paw in there, even the most brave cat. With little hesitation, they slowly padded along the muddy ground, until they had entered the cave... -
Wow, Tree Guardians, that is the best fan-made story I've seen in a while!
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Thanks!
Its only the prologue so far -
Tree Guardians 1~ The Beginning.
Prologue
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The wind whistled softly through the trees, causing the branches to sway gently in the breeze, as if they were almost dancing.
The girl walked through the forest, with bare feet. Maybe she was a wanderer, or even a young spirited tree guardian. Her light green dress fluttered in the wind, and she skipped joyfully as a slightly larger gust of wind almost swept her off her feet. A moment later, the girl turned into a tree. What a strange sight! It was a young chestnut sapling, to be precise. The bark had a gorgeous
sheen to it as the sunlight shone down on the sapling. Its branches swayed ever so lightly in the breeze, as it was still young, this meant that the branches would be quite short, so they didn't sway much. -
It is good
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SECRETS
Book One.
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Chapter One ~ The first time ~
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Kayla sat up and groaned. "No, no no! How could this be happening, really I thought things would go well, but this just so turns out to be absolute s---!" She cursed under her breath, Kayla ran hurried into her room and slammed the door shut behind her, then climbed into her bed, sighing as she did so. "Oh, why do things have to be like this?" She asked herself, obviously not expecting an answer. She wasn't that stupid.
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The sun streamed in through the gap in the curtains, the sky was a brilliant azure. Alissa was curled up on her bedroom floor, although she was completely unaware of that fact. Unfortunately it was a school day today, and if she didn't wake up soon, then of course she would be in deep trouble with her teachers, for being late AGAIN.
Her alarm clock finally woke Alissa up with a jolt. "Oh my f---ing god, I'm going to be late again." Alissa groaned, she headed over to her chair by her dressing table, and grabbed the fresh clothes that were piled on there. Hurriedly, Alissa got dressed and brushed her hair until it shone in the sunlight, turning it from brown to a pale gold. She then hurried down at and grabbed a slice of bread and flung it in the toaster. A couple of minutes later, the bread - now toast, popped up and out of the toaster. Alissa dropped it hurriedly onto a plate, then spread some butter on it. Jesus was she hungry.
The chilly winter air snapped at Alissa as she walked along to school. She hadbeen willing for winter to end soon, but it just wwouldn't go away. Careless, she shrugged as she thought about the fact that she was probably going to get a real head banging from her teacher for being late. That was strange, earlier, she had been so worried about not being on time, but now, Alissa didn't even give a f---.
Alissa soon arrived at the school gates, right there on the spot, she suddenly realized that this was the first day of a new term. That this was the first day back after two short, pathetic weeks. Reality hit her with a big blow: she had to go back to school after the holidays, it was a new f---ing term, and she just remembered that there were a few certain people at her school who made her life ten times more s---ty than it already is.Wow. Just f---ing great. [I] She thought.
Alissa shrugged, and reluctantly headed through the gates and onto the school grounds. "Brace yourself Alissa Jones, for what's going to happen next isn't going to be pretty." She muttered to herself.
Suddenly, something made her look up, maybe it was just pure instinct that told her to acknowledge what was going to happen, or who was there, in front of her.
"Oh, if it isn't Alissa Jones, herself, eh." Someone giggled. The voice sounded vaguely familiar, bucouldn't coulin't figure out who exactly it was. She forced herself to face reality, and just - for goodness sake - look up.
Ok. Here goes nothing. She looked ahead, and all of a sudden, she realized it, it just dawned upon her that the person who had just spoken, was Hannah Taylor - The one who had made Alissa's life a s---hole.
"Just f--- off and leave me alone, you whore." Alissa threatened.
"Aww diddums, did I just upset you? Aww I'm terribly sorry." Hannah giggled sarcastically. Alissa totally knew that the girl was being sarcastic.
"I don't get why I never decided to ignore you in the first place," Alissa shook her head and frowned. "Maybe it was because I'm so stupid, huh?"
Hannah forced herself to hold back a giggle, she was enjoying this so much, seeing her enemy melt down right in front of her very eyes. "Oh yes, you are extremely stupid. I can't even believe how you managed to wheedle your way into this school, since it is for high education anyway." She tutted.
"Honestly, I don't care what you think about me anymore, your presence kills my braincells." Alissa rolled her eyes, "anyway, I plan not to waste any of my precious time, with [I]you, the one who has made my life a s--- hole." Alissa stormed off, before Hannah could say anything else that wasn't worth saying.
Honestly, she is wasting her breath by saying these time wasting snidy remarks about me.Alissa thought to herself.Not like I care anyway. -
SECRETS
Book One.
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Chapter One ~ The first time ~
_____________________________________________
Kayla sat up and groaned. "No, no no! How could this be happening, really I thought things would go well, but this just so turns out to be absolute s---!" She cursed under her breath, Kayla ran hurried into her room and slammed the door shut behind her, then climbed into her bed, sighing as she did so. "Oh, why do things have to be like this?" She asked herself, obviously not expecting an answer. She wasn't that stupid.
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The sun streamed in through the gap in the curtains, the sky was a brilliant azure. Alissa was curled up on her bedroom floor, although she was completely unaware of that fact. Unfortunately it was a school day today, and if she didn't wake up soon, then of course she would be in deep trouble with her teachers, for being late AGAIN.
Her alarm clock finally woke Alissa up with a jolt. "Oh my f---ing god, I'm going to be late again." Alissa groaned, she headed over to her dressing table, and grabbed the fresh clothes that were piled on there. Hurriedly, Alissa got dressed and brushed her hair until it shone in the sunlight, turning it from brown to a pale gold. She then hurried down at and grabbed a slice of bread and flung it in the toaster. A couple of minutes later, the bread - now toast, popped up and out of the toaster. Alissa dropped it hurriedly onto a plate, then spread some butter on it. Jesus was she hungry.
The chilly winter air snapped at Alissa as she walked along to school. She hadbeen willing for winter to end soon, but it just wwouldn't go away. Careless, she shrugged as she thought about the fact that she was probably going to get a real head banging from her teacher for being late. That was strange, earlier, she had been so worried about not being on time, but now, Alissa didn't even give a f---.
Alissa soon arrived at the school gates, right there on the spot, she suddenly realized that this was the first day of a new term. That this was the first day back after two short, pathetic weeks. Reality hit her with a big blow: she had to go back to school after the holidays, it was a new f---ing term, and she just remembered that there were a few certain people at her school who made her life ten times more s---ty than it already is.Wow. Just f---ing great. [I] She thought.
Alissa shrugged, and reluctantly headed through the gates and onto the school grounds. "Brace yourself Alissa Jones, for what's going to happen next isn't going to be pretty." She muttered to herself.
Suddenly, something made her look up, maybe it was just pure instinct that told her to acknowledge what was going to happen, or who was there, in front of her.
"Oh, if it isn't Alissa Jones, herself, eh." Someone giggled. The voice sounded vaguely familiar, bucouldn't coulin't figure out who exactly it was. She forced herself to face reality, and just - for goodness sake - look up.
Ok. Here goes nothing. She looked ahead, and all of a sudden, she realized it, it just dawned upon her that the person who had just spoken, was Hannah Taylor - The one who had made Alissa's life a s---hole.
"Just f--- off and leave me alone, you whore." Alissa threatened.
"Aww diddums, did I just upset you? Aww I'm terribly sorry." Hannah giggled sarcastically. Alissa totally knew that the girl was being sarcastic.
"I don't get why I never decided to ignore you in the first place," Alissa shook her head and frowned. "Maybe it was because I'm so stupid, huh?"
Hannah forced herself to hold back a giggle, she was enjoying this so much, seeing her enemy melt down right in front of her very eyes. "Oh yes, you are extremely stupid. I can't even believe how you managed to wheedle your way into this school, since it is for high education anyway." She tutted.
"Honestly, I don't care what you think about me anymore, your presence kills my braincells." Alissa rolled her eyes, "anyway, I plan not to waste any of my precious time, with [I]you, the one who has made my life a s--- hole." Alissa stormed off, before Hannah could say anything else that wasn't worth saying.
Honestly, she is wasting her breath by saying these time wasting snidy remarks about me. Alissa thought to herself. Not like I care anyway.
Later, Alissa was sitting in maths class, waiting for the school day to finally end, but time was crawling by like a snail. She sighed, then put her pencil down on the desk. Quietly, she sneaked out of the classroom and hurried down the hallway to the girl's bathroom. She carefully pushed the door open, then went inside and locked herself in one of the cubicles. Alissa grabbed her phone from her bag, and turned it on. The familiar 'welcome' screen flashed up on her phone, next, Alissa clicked on her contacts list and scrolled through it until she found her mum's number. "Great." She whispered. Alissa cautiously hovered her finger over the 'call' button for a few seconds, contemplating whether or not to actually call her mum to pick her up from school. She sighed, then leant against the back of the door. "I don't know... I don't know if I should..." She trailed off, muttering to herself.
Alissa finally made up her mind and turned the phone off. There was no use in calling her mum because it would be too risky anyway, her mum would want avalid reason from Alissa to pick her up. She sighed, then slipped her phone back into her bag, then unlocked the door. She was about to leave the bathroom, when she heard a sound behind her. Is was a familiar sound, one that she had heard before, but she just didn't know what situation it was.
"Who's there?" She demanded. It was probably just a drip of water coming from one of the taps, but Alissa wasn't so sure of that.
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