Misty's Writing Thread and Other Stuff
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Thread Topic: Misty's Writing Thread and Other Stuff
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So my writing will go on this thread.
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Warrior Cats: Dawn Rising
Prologue
The rain lashed down like small pellets coming from the sky, the thunder crashed around up above in the dark, menacing storm clouds. The two cats prowled through the forest, their fur illuminated by the frequent flashes of lightning. One of the cats was a pale ginger tom, who had a ragged torn ear from the battle ground. Whilst, the other cat, which was much more well groomed than the first cat, was a sleek black and white she-cat. She looked as if she was a kittypet, a cat who was well fed by its twoleg owners, but actually, she was a forest cat. She had been nowhere near twolegs.
The two cats headed for a small cave that was shielded by a clump of bracken. The black and white cat seemed to move faster than the tom, maybe she was younger than him, or she just wanted to arrive at the cave first.
She led the way up until both of them reached the cave entrance. It was one, big gapoing hole that looked as if it was about to swallow any cat who dared enter the dark cave.
They slowed down when they arrived at the entrance it was as if something had deliberately slowed them down. Or maybe there was just something about the cave that was eerie, and no warrior cat, even the brave, had dared to set paw into the forbidden cave.
With little hesitation, together, both cats entered the cave, padding slowly along the hard, muddy ground, until they were fully cloaked in darkness...
By Misty :)
Please critique on this story if you want to.... Lalala -
That's not the full story yet, I will post more later. :)
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Here's some more...
Chapter One
The sun streamed in through the den entrance, leaving pale shafts of light stretching across the floor of the den. Inside, there were rustling sounds, and a moment later, a silvery grey tabby tom cat padded slowly out of the den, and into the pale early dawn light. He yawned, flashing his sharp white teeth. The cat padded over to the fresh-kill pile, and picked out a tasty looking vole.He devoured it in three whole bites, which obviously showed that he was ravenous.
Across the camp, two cats were sitting outside the elder's den, sharing stories of when they were jolly little kits. One of the cats was a dark tabby tom, and the other was a pale grey she-cat with ruffled fur. -
WRITING IS SO FUN!!!
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"Hi Dawnfur!" A cat mewed from the entrance of the apprentice's den. It was Mudpaw, Dawnfurs apprentice. "Hello Mudpaw," the tabby tom replied, he strolled over to his apprentice, and curled up next to him.
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The Dark Forest
The little girl looks out of the window mist covered . She was bored . It was raining outside , and her mother told her not to go out when it was raining .
The girl wished the rain would just stop , so she could go out and play in the woods that she lived close . She had been impatient to go there ever since her family had moved into the house .
In the end, stop the rain , and was able to go outside . The girl put on her coat and shoes , and headed toward the front door .
The forest is dark eerie and , many strange noises in the distsance . She could hear what sounded like the howling wolf nearby.
She was scared .
That was a different story -
I had translated that story from welsh...so no wonder its a bit doesn't make sense. Lol
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Darkness
There is no light
No light to be seen
The room is not bright,
Darkness covers what light
There would've been.
Just let the darkness flow
Flow into the room, let no
Light glow.
This poem I made is weird it makes no sense but oh well
I'm rubbish at writing but its fun.... -
I'm so bad at writing, writing, I'm so bad at writing every day! Hey!
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Writing, writing, writing, writing, writing lalala
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One day there was a little girl called misty, she was a boring lonely girl, she was so damn bored that something happened.....
The end :) -
Critique
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Life
Life is a big rollercoaster,
A rollercoaster into a dark pit.
There are no rainbows.
No bright sunshine.
Its just the darkness that's comes,
The pure black darkness.
It encases you,
In a thick black cloak.
There is no sunshine,
But there is rain.
If there is no sunshine, but rain comes,
There is no possibility for a rainbow.
Life is a rollercoaster
A big rollercoaster into a dark pit.. -
Its not that good
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