Birds of a feather
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Thread Topic: Birds of a feather
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Once all of the bird clans existed peacefully , now they don't
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Separated from friends and relatives just beacuse of your feather type .
It hurt knowing the ones who were once friends were just waiting for a chance to kill you .
It hurt more that everyone judged me because I was from the strongest clan
Even the one I called sister
My clan were the peacock phoenixes a race so beautiful you would do almost anything to please them , a race so deadly you would do anything to please them ,
A race so powerfull you would do anything to be one .
That's never how I felt I wasn't the only one , my sister and father were Robin phoenixes the weakest of the phoenix race .
My sister hated me , she and tried to kill me in many occasions my father had perished in a battle with my eldest brother .
I wished everything could be peaceful
Then my wish came through
Two members from each clan would be turned into a new race the nightingale race
I was the blue jay nightingale
I had to find peace before my world and its people destroyed it's self -
The start of my short story please give your honest opinions:)
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BabyChocolate NewbieOmg I love it more more moreee hehe It's different and unique LOVE IT!!!
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Thank you )
It was different the feeling that was in my body
Not excruciating pain but not painless
I was changing there was nothing I could do
It didn't matter though it was the price for equality one I was willing to pay
I hoped that the others would agree -
( bump)
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care_bear19 NewbieThis is really good
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Thank you
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Its good puppet.
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Thank you Cody
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what
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What do you mean ?!!!!
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"It's good"
"Thanks"
"I like it"
"Thanks"
"It sounds good"
"Thanks"
"what"
"What do you mean?!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
I lol'd -
there's literally nothing unique about this it's a combination of several cliches that have all been done to death
I was just confused by what bc said -
I just realised how many exclamation marks there are my I pad sometimes spams certain things there was only to be one
( note this is not to be rude )
I didn't think there was any other books or story's with birds/ people ( well maybe on or two ) yes i understand that the whole separation then try to kill thing is cliche but when it gets further in , it will become less similar to anything but thanks for your
Critism it helped have a
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