My Own Hearty Poems...

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• Nature Novice

  9 years ago
  Sorry if my poems is going to be bad.
  I need rating for my poems. 1-10
• Nature Novice

  9 years ago
  What happen to you, my dear
  You changed
  Your heart!
  Look at it!
  It's frozing
  Warm it up
  Using kindness
  Careness,
  Care more people
  What happen to you, my dear
  You changed
  You have gone
  You're dead to me
  But,
  Your heart!
  Put a fire on it
  Or we shall break it.
  What happened?
  We shall break it.
  We shall do it.
• BabyChocolate Newbie

  9 years ago
  8 I like it alot keep it up :)
• Shining Angel Newbie

  9 years ago
  Uh... I can't follow it but it's nice. Looks like a song so to appreciate it I'd give it a 6.

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