my poems...
- Locked due to inactivity on Aug 4, '16 4:32pm
Thread Topic: my poems...
-
HoneySenpai_ NoviceWow.Could you make one for me? I'll leave a decription of what I want it to be about.
-
Of course I can ... it would be my pleasure to do so
What do you want it to be about?
You want me to write like ...
I know someone named honeySenpai
I feel she is depressed for a while
Or
You want me to write as you? -
Eh,I want it to be something like this..
Description:
A girl named Catherine,who was a psychopath,had died.She was such a jealous and envious person.But once her jealousy took hold of her,it caused her to take her own life by overdosing.She refers to her love as 'Envy'
I want something like that -
I think I'll take time to figure that out... can you give me ummm say 3-5 days to write that? but I'll definitely write it... actually I'm pretty buy these days with school and homework as my final exams are approaching so I'll just write it when I'm free ...
-
*busy
-
HoneySenpai_ NoviceOk,thanks.Take as long as you need.
-
Honey... tell me how you want your poem to be please ...
-
I don't have much free time -
A girl named Catherine
I think she needed some aspirin
To remove her psychopath behavior
No body in this world could stand her misbehavior
She had died...
Let me bring her case outside
I think she was jealous
And often referred 'envious'
But once her jealousy took hola of her
I caused her to take her own life
Maybe she wanted Envy to make her his wife
Rest of the story of Catherine's mind plague
Is vague
I think she did overdosing
I wish she could understand that this could be disclosing
The damage she did inside
I wish Envy could come and open her eyes wide
And stop her from doing this
Im sure after that her life would have been a bliss -
There are some mistakes in the second paragraph so I'm just gonna correct it ...
-
But once her jealousy took hold of her
It caused her to take her own life
Maybe she wanted Envy to make her his wife
Rest of the story of Catherine's mind plague
Is vague -
You are good!
-
Thanks
-
KELLY BHATTA NewbieThank you so much . Can i know your full name plz
-
My full name is Crystal Faith Thomas
This thread is locked, therefore no new posts can be made.