my poems...

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• KELLY BHATTA Newbie

  9 years ago
  Ok ok soo whats going on
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  Percie Novice

  9 years ago
  I wrote a new poem... it's about a crush
• KELLY BHATTA Newbie

  9 years ago
  May i have the honour to listen it
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  Percie Novice

  9 years ago
  For my crush, for whom I wrongly fell ...
  
  I made a mistake
  I never knew that this would end as a blunder
  I knew that you were five years elder to me
  Let me tell you that the golden time I spent with you were all glee
  But I knew some day I will have to flee
  I knew this love story was impossible
  I wish that just some how we could make this possible
  I know I tell everyone that you are like a big brother to me
  I know this is not the truth
  I feel differently for you
  I wish you could understand that
  I loved you baby please understand this fact
  I don't know what else to say
  Just understand that I feel this way
• KELLY BHATTA Newbie

  9 years ago
  Awsome
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  Percie Novice

  9 years ago
  Thank you
• KELLY BHATTA Newbie

  9 years ago
  When we were small we all had our own ambitions some wanted to bcum doctor some teacher some actor and in my case a fairy the world seemed lie a fairytale as we grew old everything changed the real world stood like a mirror where i've known the truth of the world its not a fairytale bt.... Here i stand today with happiness and tears in my eyes giving a fairewell to each one of us i will miss all the days we spent together the days light as a feather the gossips the quarrel everything im gonna miss today and forever fairwell to you my dear friends wishing for your bright future here i leave good bye and love you forever
• KELLY BHATTA Newbie

  9 years ago
  I am sry fr troubling u bt u promised to help plz fix all those above lines
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  Percie Novice

  9 years ago
  By fix .. you mean to say? ? please explain what you want me do ...
• Redrose2 Newbie

  9 years ago
  I think she or he means the spelling perice
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  Percie Novice

  9 years ago
  Okay.. thank you by the way she's she
• Redrose2 Newbie

  9 years ago
  Oh ok I didnt know
  Your welcome
• KELLY BHATTA Newbie

  9 years ago
  Percy i meant ryhme it for me plz and redrose2 i am a girl what about you
• KELLY BHATTA Newbie

  9 years ago
  Percy please add some more lines aswell
• Redrose2 Newbie

  9 years ago
  Same