Add on to the Story
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Thread Topic: Add on to the Story
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Ok I'll start
She sat in the backseat of her uncle's car and breathed in the smell of putrid gas as he filled the tank. She looked around at the tiny town of Contralto and wished she was back in New York. Her uncle jumped and the car a pressed the gas pedal all the way to the floor. "Can you slow down?" Selene asked. Her uncle laughed as the drove down a dirt road that looked desolate and abondanded. -
All at once, he veered off the road and crashed. They both died.
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flounder101 NewbieShe woke gasping. Sweat pouring down her face; clutching at a cramp in her side. All a dream.
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flounder101 NewbieRelif washed through her vains and she fell back into an uneasy sleep.
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flounder101 Newbiehaha sooooooo much detail in mine (that was sarcasm for all you inadequate people out there)
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She watched in horror, however, as her uncle pulled up beside a large hole and pushed her in. "That'll get rid 'o this pest!"
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Selene shrieked in fear as she fell into the hole. She could see her uncle at the top. She held out her hand, staring up at him with wide eyes. "You're kidding, right? You'll pull me up, won't you?" Her uncle bent down, holding out his hand. "Sure, kiddo.." She went to reach for it, but he pulled his hand away, got into the car, and left her stranded in the hole.
Once again, she woke up, this time wondering why her dream had lead to something so horrible. Her uncle would have never done that. -
She was realieved that it was only a dream as she stood and got ready to go to school. She rushed to get her stuff but then she realized the clothes she had worn to bed last night had dirt on them. She got a sinking feeling in her stomach. "What if that wasn't a dream." she thought as she threw the clothes in the waste basket. She ran out the door to catch the bus as her uncle drove by and his eyes bugged out and his car swerved on the highway.
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She died and she had a dramatic death.
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midnightkobra I found your ending funny.
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