Warriors short story contest.
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Thread Topic: Warriors short story contest.
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Two short paragraghs submitted by the fifth, must include cat's name, clan, and position, must include hardship. Prizes are as follows:
First place: A warriors fanfic including your OC with one of mine!
Second place: a warriors disscution in a seperate thread
Third: a shout-out quiz. -
I'll join~
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Well it's kinda hard to fit a whole story into just two paragraphs, but here goes~
(Also the first paragraph is really long sorry XD)
Run. Run. Run, Run, Run!
The word echoed in the tabby's mind as she raced through the trees. An ambush. She should've seen it coming, she should've expected it, she should've done something. But she didn't. And now they might all be dead. Her ginger fur blended easily into the red-orange forest, filled with the colors of Leaf-Fall, but her sisters' pale silver and ash gray pelts stood out prominently. A flash of blue suddenly filled her vision and she skidded to a halt, the three she-cats barely avoiding tumbling over the edge of the cliff and into the lake below. "Firefly," A panicked voice called. The ginger tabby looked over towards her silver-furred sister, Ravenheart, who was looking back at her desperately. "What do we do?" Firefly opened her mouth to answer, but was cut off by a much deeper voice. "Well, we finally caught you." Two shapes appeared from the trees, one pitch black and the other pale brown. Firefly's other sister, Wolfsong, snarled at the pair of toms. "Alright, Firefly, I know how much you want to keep your sisters safe." The brown tom smirked as he spoke. "Don't." Wolfsong growled. "We can fight them." The ginger shook her head quickly. "No! No, don't hurt them. I'm the deputy, I'm the one you want gone." The black tom laughed, his dark blue eyes narrowed and shining with an evil glint. "How about this? You jump off that cliff there, and we'll let your precious sisters go." Ravenheart's eyes widened. "No!"
So now Firefly had a choice. She could fight. She was strong, Wolfsong was strategic, and Ravenheart was fast.They might win. It was possibility. So she could fight. Or she could jump. She knew the black tom, Thornclaw, would keep his word. Ravenheart and Wolfsong wouldn't be harmed. She closed her eyes and tuned out the noise around her, Ravenheart's protests, Wolfclaw's hissing, Thornclaw's laughter. It was now or never. She couldn't risk her sisters getting hurt. Firefly turned away, took a deep breath, and jumped.
(Okay that's it sorry it's not very good XD you said it had to include hardship so here) -
Woah...
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Was that a good woah or a bad woah? XD
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Scourgelover NoviceIt was good, lucky
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Scourgelover NoviceOkay, here's mine:
Mistykit sniffed around, poking her tiny nose out of the bushes. Silverkit, her sister, shuddered with coldness and fear. "Shh!" Mistykit shushed her sister. Silverkit stopped shivering, but Mistykit could tell that she was still scared. Mistykit padded silently through the trees, and she stopped once in a while to scent the air. Silverkit whimpered. "Mistykit, let's go back to camp," she suggested quietly. Mistykit shook her head. She dug her claws hard in the ground to stop herself from acting like a scaredy-mouse like Silverkit.
A tear rolled down Silverkit's cheek. "M-Mistykit," she stammered. "I-I-" Before she could say anything, a big grey tabby leapt out from behind them. He growled and slashed his claws. "Get away!"
Silverkit yowled for help and battered the tabby as hard as she could. Mistykit screamed and raised a paw, ready to slash. But instead, she felt the tabby's sharp claws sinking into her flesh. Then Silverkit's shout, "MISTYKIT!" was the last thing she heard... -
Scourgelover NoviceShorter than I thought.
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Deadline is friday, and so far I love them both!
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Scourgelover NoviceThx! I never entered a story contest before, so that means a lot
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I'm going to use my own OC
Name: Darestripe
Darestripe was out in the lush green forest of the Thunderclan camp looking for fresh kill when she spotted a bird on the rotton log in front of her. She got into position and waited until the right moment to pounce. As she pounced she smelled the scent of Twolegs and decided to investigate. She followed the scent and saw tons of the Twolegss monsters. She opened her eyes wide with terror as she realized what they were doing. They were tearing the forest apart. She ran through the forest and saw the Thunderclan enterence.
"Twolegs are tearing down the forest she yowled. All of the warriors stopped in there tracks and looked worried. Stripeheart went to warn Ravenstar about what was happening. Ravenstar stepped out of his den and walked out to the clearing. "We need other warriors to see if what Darestripe said is true." Ravenstar said. Ravenstar looked around the clearing. "I want my deputy Stripheart to go along with Darestripe, Thrushpelt and Mistyfur." Ravenstar announced. Darestripe led the deputy and other warriors to where the Twolegs and there machines were. "I will go warn Ravenstar and bring him here. Darestripe make sure the other warroirs stay here." Stripeheart said. Darestripe looked around after Stripeheart left and got curious but she had to obey the orders that Stripeheart had told her. "Can we please do something?" Thrushpelt and Mistyfur whined. Darestripe looked at them. "You can go hunt some fresh kill but don't go near the Twolegs." Darestripe said. Darestripe watched them run off into the forest near the camp. She watched the monsters tear down the trees that used to be full of fresh kill. "HELP!" someone yowled. Darestripe was startled at this and rushed toward the sound. Darestripe found Thrushpelt with his eyes full of terror looking at one of the monsters. Darestripe followed his gaze and saw Mistyfur was looked in a weird box. "Stay here!" she yowled at Thrushpelt. She ran toword Mistyfur with all the strength and speed she could handle. Before she could get to Mistyfur a moster drove in front of her and hit her. Even though the moster hit Darestrie she was still alive but barely. "I have to get to Mistyfur." she thought. She dragged herself across the yard and took all the strngth she had left to leap on top of the moster wear Mistyfur was at. She looked at the metal box and it looked like the box that had trapped Greystripe when he was deputy. Darestripe used her paw and pushed up the thing that was keeping Mistyfur inside and the box opened. Mistyfur ran out of the box and thanked Darestripe. "Please don't die Darestripe." Mistyfur cried out. "Get out of here while you can." Darestripe said her breaths getting shallower. "Thank you Darestripe." Mistyfur said. The last thing Darestripe saw before she died was Mistyfur embracing Thruhpelt. Darestripe died with a smile on her face. -
Sorry about it being so long! :)
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I like them alot!
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Okay, places are as follows:
First: Lucky!
Second: Scourgelover!
Third: Jinx Blackclaw!
I loved all of these stories! They were amazing! Lucky, please get back to me ASAP about that fanfic. Scourgelover, I'm about to make the thread. -
Yayyyyyyyy thank you~
Do you just need the details for the oc
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