Should I continue this story?
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Thread Topic: Should I continue this story?
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Ginger sat on the stool while Julia attemtped to drag the hairbrush through her hair. "Your twelve years old, now act like it!" All Julia ever did was try to get the weekly prize fir having the best room, wich this week was ice cream. Now, Julia could make everything as spick and span as possible, bbut Ginger Mackenzie and Alyssa would always mess it up again. Ginger retreated to her bed, crossing another circle off the wall. "Opperation Barber shop run has failed." She sighed. The orphanage was terrible, and no matter how many times they tried to escape, they got caught, and nobody would adopt them. "It's all gonna work tonight!" Ginger told her sisters. She helped them sneak food, clothes, and other supplies in her empty school bag. At lights out, Ginger stayed awake. There were five checks, the last one at Midnight. Nobody knew but Ginger. After the last check, Ginger slipped from her bed, awoke her sisters, and started to climb down the gutter, catching her sisters as they fell to the ground. "One, two." The girls looked back once at the orphanage. The front street made it warm and inviting, but the back alley made it look like a factory. Turning to the street Alyssa squeezed Ginger's hand. "There's bad people out there." She said. Ginger then relized what she was getting herself into. "Yeah, there are,"
I have really big plans for this. They meet up with two young theives in another alleyway, and they end up theives themselves. -
Please?
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Yes. You should.
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No.
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Thank you for your input. I will most likely make it a quiz series.
Why no? Not that I don't want your opinion, I just would appreciate your telling of my mistakes. -
I would really thik you should make it into a series. It's different than waht i usually read on here, and i like reading different things frome time to time. ^w^
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Work on your spelling. Otherwise good.
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