The Castle of Fox
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Thread Topic: The Castle of Fox
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On that wonderful day where nobody was hungry, on that wonderful day that everybody was outside, that wonderful day that everyone was playing with their children on the cobblestone road is when it all happened. A little twelve year old girl with reddish-brown hair was swinging a basket full of strawberries and humming a tune. She skipped down the cobblestone, unaware that someone was following her. Her name was Hannah, but you could call her Finch, she was a flightly girl with a peppy attitude. She finally stopped skipping when she arrived at the horse stables and fed her favorite horse a strawberry when a voice said behind her, "Come, come, Finchy. Come with me.". The voice was in a low hiss-like whisper, quite scary if you asked Finchy. She screamed and whipped around and saw nothing. Eyes wide, she turned her back again and started to stroke the horse warily, heart pounding. "Finchyyy.....finchy....." Suddenly, a hand grabbed her shoulder and she spun around, then let out a sigh of relief. It was Kayla and Kaetlyn, Finchy's best friends. "Did you hear that noise too?" Finchy asked. Kayla nodded. "Did you know that this stable was built over an underground castle?" She asked. Finchy nodded, remembering the stories told by her dad when she was younger. "The people that died before the city collapsed underground became spirits, and they haunt the underground castle. They call to unsuspecting children and kids, luring them down underground. You musn't listen to the voices," Kayla urged. Finchy nodded and started to stroke the horse's muzzle again. Kaetlyn and Kayla said at the same time, "Gotta go," and quickly walked away. Finchy blinked a little when she heard the snake voice again. "Come, little girl..." Finchy furrowed her brow and stamped her foot, hand tightly cluching the basket, "No! Go away! I won't listen to you!" There was a long pause and Finchy was sure that she succeeded when a screeching voice howled, "Then we'll take you!" Out of the ground below her came a scaly, scabby gray hand from underground. It grabbed her ankle. With a scream, Finchy dropped the basket and out tumbled the strawberries and down underground she went.
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It was as if she just fell underground. Her feet hit the solid rock floor of the undergound passageway to the Castle of Fox. She stood there, trembling, as she brushed herself off. A slow bubbling told her that there was lava somewhere. She walked away from the castle and saw an ending of the ground. The ground stopped arupltly like a perfect vertical line and there was the lava, bubbling and fizzing. Finchy slowly backed away and ran into something. She screamed and fell on her butt. The thing she ran into was inside a dark cloak. She screamed again and frantically started to back up, her palms digging into the sharp rocks. Soon she was at the edge. "B-back off!" She yelled
The hooded figure slowly reached out a hand and flipped out its dark hood. There stood a beautiful woman with silvery blond hair and...and angel wings? What was an angel doing in raggedy clothes and underground in this hellhole of a castle? Finchy slowly reached out her hand and the angel helped her off the ground. "Thanks," she said. The angel blinked in reply and spread out her arms and grabbed Finchy's wrist. With a powerful flap, the angel was up in the air. Finchy looked up, trying to see where she had fallen from. Wait, she couldn't even see the ceiling! All she could see were the highest towers of a castle she could ever imagine. The angel landed on the drawbridge and turned to face Finchy. Suddenly, the angel's skin started to turn gray, her eyes started to turn yellow and sunken, and the feathers on her wings started to molt off, revealing bat wings. Her hair grew grizzled and short. Reaching out a bony hand, she grabbed Finchy by the neck and started to lift her up! -
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OH SNAP SOMEONE'S IN TROUBLE
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HEHEHE.
I HAVE A PLAN THOUGH I JUST DONT FEEL LIKE TYPING IT
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