Tribe gracious story planning.
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Thread Topic: Tribe gracious story planning.
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Here.
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Any ideas?
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We won a million dollars are we are on our way to Italy and the plane breaks down in the Bahamas and all we have us a broken plane few supplies and we need go put out heads together to fix the plane and gather supplies
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Ok,now to work on fleshing it out. We only have around 5 paragraphs so its gotta be rather short.
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Also, no way in heck you can fix a plane thtmat crashed in the bahamas, so perhaps get to civilization 100 miles away in cuba, kr any other civilisation (boats at sea etc)
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*742
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Coast of florida is more realistic,
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So for plot, how is this?
1, The plane, just to give a little background on why they're on the plane and the crash.
2, scavenge, gathering the supplies needed to survive, the search for food and setting up shelter. At end mentioning of a small raft they were making.
3, natives. Natives are on that island and they aren't happy. Brief fight scene (somebody dies (non native(natives die some too))) before they realise its hopeless, grabbing what little supplies they have before launching in the raft.
4, next, them drifting to a new island. Deciding only to gather food with plans of setting off again.
5. Drifting, the journey to florida. You can have sharks, hunger drama, whateva just make it dramatic.
6, boat. They spot a boat, they try and signal it by setting fire to some if their supplies. The halpy ending.
Just so y'all know, anything I post is intended for revision. -
And for characters, should it be that we all won survivor to get the million :P
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What about a different plot?
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Suggest away,
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I have no internet tommorrow so am trying to get the ball rolling as fast as possible.
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Ok. Sorry. One moment as I type it up.
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s---, all I have is serial killer, demon, and bio-chanical powers. None of these fit well with islands. Wait. I know. Global Warming.
The Bahamas was full of people, most relaxing in the sun and dipping in the warm-breezed ocean or pools. In some areas, it has become more civilized. Business, sky-scrapers, etc.. When a global catastrophe is announced on the national news, every single Bahamanian begins to scrabble and scramble, trying to usher off of the island, as supposedly the island would sink first.
Of course, the scientist's theory proved wrong, as North America, South America and parts of Antarctica became utterly devastated, all of civilization being wiped out. The eastern continents, such as Australia or Asia, was flooded also, but not nearly as bad as the west. Now, the only safe areas are the islands, as they have been lifted from the sheer force of the waves and flooding, and simply float. Some islands were submerged, and some weaker islands became horribly devastated, the entire thing collapsing and wasting away.
Now, on The Bahamas, the Bahamanians are at war with each other. Some think that the out-side world is still alive, just over the horizon. Others insist that every single continent had been submerged and is now un-livable. The former are known as The Resistance, and the latter The Security. The Resistance believe the Bahamas, known also as The Ark, will either flood over first, or run out of food and every-body will starve. The latter is known as The Security, they believe that, if there is order, The Bahamas will stay safe and orderly. But whether or not either of them are correct, they are at war.
Who will win?
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