My poems.
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Thread Topic: My poems.
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In the chill of the night
I stand, facing the moon
Shrouded by wisps
Of dusk twilight gloom
But still I doth reign
In this dreary existence
As the world stops spinning
The fiery stars seem tense
Controlling the world
I feel it in my veins
That till the morning sun
I still doth reign
In this dreary existence
I have known as Earth
I will shatter it all
Till the day's rebirth -
Gazing into his sapphire complexion
Eyes shifting towards a new direction
Towards the heavens, meekly bowing
His dry, cracked lips ever frowning
A subconscious cry, A final daze
Awakes the king from fervent laze
Finally he smiles upon his devastated kingdom
And knows things will be better. -
Watering can
Though old and rusted
Gripped tightly in hand
Trek to the garden
A mystical journey
Showering thirsty bulbs
Ever yearning
Sights of frothy dew
Haven't got a clue
Of who consumed Grandmother's cucumbers
Slick slugs, by the numbers
Salt chases them away
And though the rain pours
And the sun blazes on
My garden stays
Yes, my enchanted world stays -
Death lingers over me
Like a shadow
Always there
Yet never seen
Hatred fleas
When death knocks
For anger is key
When mourns are in shock -
I love them all, especially the last one!!
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Thanks ;) If you want, YOU can post some here, too.
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Thanks! I'm not much of a port, but I'll definatley try sometime!
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Sure :D You don't have to
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Malik NewbieThese are lovely. Very nice writing, and wonderful adjectives and rhythm.
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Oh, thank you very much. You are so kind :)
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Malik NewbieYou're quite welcome.
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Crash through the uncrashable building
Escape the unescapable vortex
Climb the unclimbable mountain
Maze through the unmazable forest
While some think it's impossible
To reach that unreachable shelf
Just go see if it's unprovable
Why not prove it yourself? -
These are wonderful.
(Btw, Malik is my O.C. So that was me speaking. xD) -
(whoa... really? Oh wow! Thanks!)
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(E'yup. Trying to level him up since it won't let me link a quiz. You're welcome, again.)
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