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Once in England, there was a handsome boy with silky black hair and violet eyes. The boy had a pretty little sister and two loving parents. His sister had flowing bluish-black hair and sparkling cyan eyes. The family lived in a gorgeous and large house. One day, when the boy was of age eleven and his sister of age eight, their parents left to run an important errand, leaving their son in charge. They had been home alone only thirty-two minutes when a group of violent men crashed through the door. The two siblings, who were at the climax in a game of chess, abandoned their game and stared at the men.
"Search the house." one of the men, who seemed to be the leader, yelled at the others in a gruff and harsh voice. "I will handle the children." He spat out the word 'children' as if they were filthy rats.
The boy pulled his sister behind him. "Why are you here?" he asked, trying to mask the fear in his voice for the sake of the petrified girl behind him.
The man pulled out a knife as his men ransacked the house. "Don't worry about that." He advanced towards the children.
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The boy took three steps back. "P-please let us go. You w-won't hear from us, a-and w-we, we won't tell a s-s-soul about this!"
The man took four steps forward. The boy could smell the alchohol in his breath. "I'm afraid I can't take that risk." The man grabbed the girl and put the smirking blade against her throat and both children screamed.
The boy screamed. "NO!" A deadly silence filled the room and the girl was crying hysterically, thinking her life would end there. The boy's heart beat furiously against chest. "P-please, let us...let us spend our final moments w-with eachother."
The man threw them into a room after a few minutes of thought. He locked them in and yelled, "You have ten minutes, then I kill you both!"
There weren't any windows. The boy took his sister into his arms and she was sobbing loudly, while his tears were silent. He wanted to seem to his sister.
"Rayen..." he said quietly, gently carressing her soft blueish-black hair. "I want you to run as far and fast as you possibly can."
The girl looked up at him, scared and confused. How was she supposed to escape if there weren't any winows?
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The boy pulled away and pryed open a floorboard, grunting in effort. He pulled out a mace that his bad ass parents hid there for emergencies. Summoning every ounce of strength he had, the boy swung the weapon at the wall. After a few swings, the wall collapsed.
"HEY!" the man screamed in the distance. They heard his heavy footsteps approaching. The boy yelled desperately at his beloved sister. "Run!" he told her, "Run, Rayen, and don't turn back!" He saw her hesitation. "I'll see you soon, don't worry." The boy gave a weak smile. Rayen did as he told her.
The door crashed open and the man emerged.
Rayen reached the top of the hill that overlooked the house. She waited a few minutes until the house was consumed in flames. She realized her brother would never return to her. Rayen's hands flew to her mouth. "No..." she breathed. "No! NO!! NO!!"she collapsed and threw her head into her arms and sobbed. "NO!! NO!! VICTOR!!!"
It was then that her parents returned home. Rayen's father called the police as her mother hugged her and cryed also. Although they weren't there, they knew what happened. Their son was dead.
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Love it.
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This took me 20 fcking minutes to write.
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EVERYONE CLICK THIS.
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You like it this much?
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Yes it's better then anything I written
And better then a lot of things I seen
I know this is showing up in recent posts so CLICK.
CLICKKKK.
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Oh my, that was really good
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Dani- Aww thanks and no I have not.
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This is amazing. I love it! Wow, I believe it took twenty minutes to do this :3 That was really good.
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Thank you! ^-^
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Aw, so sad. But very interesting. I liked it a lot!! :)
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