I have a new story idea.
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"Remind me again why we're here." My best friend, Kelly, said.
I sighed, "I already told you. I had a dream that a guy was walking down fourth street, and a car came and hit him."
"And you think it'll happen?" Kelly asked doubtfully, raising an eyebrow at me.
"They've come true before. You, more than anyone, should know that. Yours have come true too." I shrugged.
These dreams happen a lot. Both Kelly and I have had experiences with them. They started when we were both six. Ten years later, we're still having them. We don't know why these things happen to us. All we know is that we got them for a reason, we just need to figure out the reason.
"Yeah, but, we shouldn't try to stop them, Kaylee. That's messing up the balance of the world and the future." Kelly persisted. She had long black hair with a streak of red in them and hazel eyes. She was wearing skinny jeans, white boots, and a white flowing top.
"I don't care. Maybe I was given that dream so I could stop it from happening. Now, come on, it's almost midnight." I told here and then took off running down the street to get to fourth street.
Kelly was right on my heels the whole time, and when we turned on fourth street, I saw the guy walking on the sidewalk.
"Now what do we do?" Kelly asked, out of breath.
"I'll show you." I said. "Hey!" I shouted at the guy and made him turn around.
Just then, the car started coming down the street.
"What?" He shouted back and I took off running towards him.
"Get out of the way! That car's going to hit you!" I yelled and he turned his head and jumped out of the way of the car before it hit him.
That didn't stop the car though. It kept on speeding down the street with its two right tires on the sidewalk.
"Move, Kaylee." Kelly said and then pulled me out of the way before the car got to us.
"Thanks." I huffed.
"You looked like a deer in headlights." Kelly commented.
We watched the car go down to the end of the street and watched it turn around again.
"How did you know that I would be here?" The guy's voice said behind us and made me jump.
"We didn't." I told him.
"Uh, guys. We need to get away from this house unless if we all wanna be dead." Kelly urgently said and we ran to the next four house to be safe and then hid in their bushes.
I saw the car's headlights slowly drive down the road.
"Why did you tell us to move?" I whispered to Kelly. The guy was in-between us.
"Okay, so I had one too." Kelly confessed.
"I thought you didn't want to change the future." I whispered.
"I didn't. You did. This guy was suppose to get hit by that car and the car was then about to hit us by that house." Kelly whispered back.
"You still changed it because then we were suppose to die if you saw us get hit." I said. The guy's head was moving back and forth between us.
"Back mine wouldn't have come true if you ignored yours and let this guy die. Now the whole balance of the world is messed up." Kelly whispered angrily.
"We'll discuss this when we get back home." I declared and then stared through the bushes. The car was no where to be found.
"I think it's safe to go out now." The guy said and slowly stood up. Both Kelly and I grabbed his arms and pulled him back down.
"Wait for the shots." We both said.
Five minutes later, the car came back down the street and started firing a gun. We all covered our ears.
When the shots stopped, Kelly and I stood up.
"You can go home now." Kelly said, disgust and annoyance filling her voice.
"Uh, thanks." He said and slowly stood up. Now that my adrenaline wasn't going and I was calm, I got a good look at him.
He looked like he was seventeen. He had short messy, brown hair and deep green eyes. He was very cute and his cloths were all dirty.
"I don't think I caught your names." He said as we stepped onto the sidewalk.
"And you don't want to know our names. It'll bring you nothing but trouble. Don't say a word to the police." Kelly said, pointing her finger at his face, and giving him a threatening stare.
"Come on, lets go." I told Kelly and we both took of running back home. -
Nice! ^_^
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Eh, I found a mistake!! Right here:
"Back mine wouldn't have come true if you ignored yours and let this guy die. Now the whole balance of the world is messed up." Kelly whispered angrily.
It's suppose to say "But mine".
And thanks :). I just got that idea like an hour ago :P. -
Sounds cool
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Thanks :).
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ITS AMAZING!!!! :D
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Thank you, Ash :).
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What's the guy's name? *blushes* whoa. that wasn't supposed to happen..
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Pretty good!
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I love it! Write more! :D
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Thanks guys :D. I got part one up. It's called "Premonitions".
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Keep going.
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I made a story/quiz thingy. Click on my profile and click the one that says "Premonitions (part 1)".
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Part two is up.... In case if anyone is looking at this....
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Part three is up. You know, if anyone still looks at this....
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