Forever Dark {Part 1} | Comments

You got a few grammatical errors there..Such as..

Scarlett sighed,"What?" "You're mother nature!"Ryan exclaimed:::::

You wrote it like that; it's supposed to be...

Scarlett sighed,"What?"
"Yo u're Mother Nature!"Ryan exclaimed.
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Erm I know I am being a bit strict on that and I'm probably talking bulls---, but I really can't help it xD

Anyway, I thought it was really good! :) Keep it up.

Sorry, I keep forgeting things. Black Veil Brides are awesome! My favorite song is Knives and Pens. Fallen Angels comes in a close second.

Wouldn't you be angry as s---?They just accuse you of being mother nature! To me they sound crazy...xD If that happened to me, I'd be outta' there! :L

WOW! That was really good! I loved it when someone happens to the main person... So when she glowed, I was like... WOW! Please make more!

Oh and you don't have to apologize for the length, I thought it was perfect :)

Loved this! ^^ excellent job. Btw is that purple room going to be scarlett's because purple is my favorite color :) (if not, if should be ryan's ;)

I love the song Perfect weapon by the black veil brides:))) My fav. Any way good quiz:D

This is an epic quiz. I dont really use that word a lot so that means this is the best of the best right here!

@xxblutixx - Thanks so muchh!! && Yeppers, the purple room is Scarlett's ;) [Lmao, I was thinking the SAME thing bout it being Ryan's!! xD]

2: Oh, okaii. Thanks!! :DD

Sure you can call me Maya! That's my name hehe

How are you still a novice? Can you give me some ideas?