Don't leave me hanging part 30 | Comments

Okay I have some free time so I can finally comment/read. When we last left off we were entering Blake's party *eye twitches* and we were going along with Jack's plan *facepalms* I ranted enough about his plan let the party commence. AAAAHHH Okay let me get this straight some girl was chasing this guy but then Jack bumped into her and then he ran off and Oceana is following Jack *head spins* yup this is a party alright. YAY JUSTIN

Oh my gosh! That's awesome that your quiz got over 500 readers because that is hard to do!!! You've accomplished so much as a writer on GTQ like making it to the thirty mark, getting over five hundred viewers, making quizzes a favourite of most readers, and writing for over one year. So congrats! =D *gives you a high-five* By the way, random I know, have you read the "Hush, Hush" series? I recall you mentioning that on a comment of yours in "The Life Between Magic & Boys"... I've started reading the third book and wondering if it's good or not. Just want to know your opinion ^.^

AH WHO'S TOUCHING ME!!! *karate chops* oh... sorry Cory, I should've known it was you. We Don't Need A Plan???? WE DON'T NEED A PLAN!!! Okay okay Cory I'm sorry but, for the sake of your sanity I'm NOT going to go there. I already ranted about the plan so there. HA that's funny, I might not like the guy characters sometimes, but I love their personalities and Cory watching Dancing with the Stars is hilarious!!! WHOOOAA... did Cory just DO THAT??? Okay Cory just scored some romance points, I have no idea how but... I actually wasn't repulsed by that it was rather... suave and charming. Cory has made it to my number 2 spot! It's like I always say, a girl's way into a guy' heart is through his stomach, but a guy's way into a girl's heart is through dancing. Boy does Cory have style ;) Okay he needs self restraint but that dance was pretty romantic so I'll let him off scott free. Ecth a sketch pick up line? Meh he lost a few points for that, but he's still number 2. Kris has cold fingers? we have something in common. Okay Kalia is smart, I want to hang out with her now. A dance with Kris? Well this can go 1 of 2 ways... but I'll give him a chance, I'm being quite generous today though. Okay... not bad. I give him one point, but that's it. He's not number 3 yet but a few more calm scenes like that (when he's not being a drama queen and flying out the window like a psycho) he'll make the spot. Until then, he's in neutral.

Oh my gosh, that was great. I loved it! :D Loved the humour, romance, and drama in the part! I knew that something bad would happen! Like, I don't know, Blake seeing through the mask of the main character? Does that mean he knows that the group is there with a purpose of stealing the spirit medallion, too? :O That'd be bad because that would mean the mission is going to fail so yeah... And Kiki, she changed a lot... So I'm guessing she became a vampire. I find it very gross that she drank that much blood but who am I to judge? Maybe blood tastes good or something... I hope she snaps out of this new personality because it'd be bad if the main character is to keep that promise of killing her. What happened to the other girl in the cell, the one who was in love with Logan? Anyway, I'm sad about Jack and curious about what problems he's dealing with. I wonder if it has to do with the time he was part of Blake's group. Maybe he met Vixla there and had some kind of relationship together. Please don't tell me that's so!!!! I've just got out of my decisiveness and decided I like Jack and Cory most (but I probably end up confused and such because you have a knack for making all the guys dreamy). By the way, I was smiling throughout the Cory scene because I found it cute and funny. He's got a talent for doing unexpected things like that :) . Can't wait for the next part like always and congrats for making it to the thirty mark! Sorry for making my comment long again but... I love your series very much (I hope that this helps so don't be mad *shields face*) :P

Oooh, a kiss on the hand? Another bonus point for Kris. He's not number 3 JUST YET but he's on the road to it. Oh so THESE TWO are fighting? Uh huh, as fun as this is I'm just going to cut the power now that the guards aren't looking and take the GLOWING necklace out of this joint... well that's what I'd do. Apparently I'm going upstairs instead. AH who's being creepy this time? AW F*** BLAKE!! *kicks in the nuts* I've been dying to do that for a while. Well this is the end and I've got to say, I want to find out what the main character does to Blake... this'll be fun XD

So I know I don't really comment much but this was amazing! your such a talented writer! I've always been stuck between Jack, Cory, and Kris :p there all so attractive and have amazing characteristics so it hard to pick! (X make the next part!

xxblutixx, srry I forgot to tell u I am also known as doterofapollo I really want u to take my quizzes to c what u think: vampires are good... If you love them, when u done just click my link and u will see the others oh and make sure it is the first one I forgot to put part two on the other one pretty pretty please? Oh and please for the love of god make the next one! XD I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kris and blake are soooooo hot *thinks of Kris at my school kissing me unexpectedly then going home to find Blake sitting on my front porch then he gets up to kiss me* oops srry dazed out *feints cause thinks bout it again*

It's ok, I have lapses in my editing too. :) Yeah, like _ViolaLover_, I was hoping Jack would show up, but Kris and Cory were good subs. ;) As usual, can't wait for part 31! *starts muttering to self* me and Blake on a balcony in the dark and he knows who i am. this is gonna be fun...

I knew I was gonna run into Blake I myself attract trouble. Lol I don't I'm a goody two shoes. Part 31 must be out soon. And pshhh I'm not _____ what are you talking about I'm her twin sister Maria. Duh!

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first: *curses in italian and then in spanish* second: hopefully i hug him seeming i already knew and come up with a lie third: *curses in italian and then in spanish again* fourth: holy crap fith: omg ! OMG! I FINALLY GET THIS COMPUTER FIXED ON ACTUALLY COMMENTING ON THESE! yes! *VICTORY DANCE* FIFTH: ............O.O A CLIFFHANGER! RIGHT WHEN IT.... GAHHHHHHHHH

My comment got cut off -.- I'll re-type it now. I LOVE ROOT BEER FLOATS!!! Uh oh... I know what she's ordering, and it's not tomato juice. Oh great now she's guzzing the stuff!!! we're done for :( HA I KNEW IT WAS BLOOD!!! Oh HELL No!! Normally I would run for my life when approached by an evil drunken vampire but... SHE HIT JUSTIN!!! prepare to feel the wrath of my... wrath!! OMFG KIKI!!! She wasn't joking around, that venom really did a number on her :( I'm not going to kill her, but I want to try and cure her. I really love my reassuring Justin

I just looked at my previous comment and that's horrible!!! I didn't realize that the length was too long and I'm so sorry.

I loved it so much! I loved the scene with Cory and I wonder what's going to happen with Blake? Can't wait for the next one and as always, I'll be looking.

What the heck is wrong with Jack =( and WHY didn't I get to dance with him *tear* yeah get he's all busy saving the world and stuff, but still....I can't wait for the next one!