Different part 1 | Comments

Okay, the description and emotion of the character? MIND BLOWING. Totally fantastiquee! I loved the way you gave background on the character and there was so much feelings for this release. I feel sorry for her; she misses her best friend. How did she lose her mum? :( I am definitely looking forward to the next one (:

This was good, but I don't think you gave enough description on characters, and the pacing is a little slow. Othere than that it was good....

Im different and I know it *lmfao music starts playing*

Also, please read my friend's quiz series, If You Follow a Rabbit!

That was so awesome. Totally deep to.

So awesome! Great quiz, sis! My name is different girl because i love this story!

Beautiful :') looking forward To the next part!!!

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is a different story and unique. It sounds very poetic which I LOVE!!!!!!!!! Has a lot of emotion even though it's the first part!!!!!!IT WAS FREAKIN FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!! !!! MAKE the next one SOOOOOOONNNNN!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

Wonderful characterization and opening. It was deep and compelling. Continue! :)

That was amazing and sad at the same time I can't wait for the next part

NOOO why did you lose the will its SOOO awesome! D: