Crystal Clear all over again | Comments

All right, who pushed me >:( they are getting a... grrrr... and *sigh* Cora is one of those girls? I hope she doesn't have the attitude to go with it...

As for this part as a whole, it was pretty good, just watch your grammar at points. Just minor things like capitilization and verb tenses. I liked the description you included, especially with the Bio teacher and his twitching mustache XP I can't help but wonder about this guy in the blankie... it's sight in school, and I wonder what his story is. Hope you can get part 2 out soon :)

P.S. Thanks for the shoutout thing-ma-bobber! ^^ I'm really glad that you like my series :3 and the other three writers are AMAZING! Oh, and I don't know if you know, but Cometlight has a story on Wattpad.com called "Shattered Lives". I just read the newest-ish chapter, and it's really good ^^

P.P.S. YES! YOU HAVE TO READ xxdarkxx's series! Hehe... sorry I got excited... she is my inspiration :) I have billion other series that I know are good if you ever need reading material :)

Tanner sounds like a guy that I know. He's really cute too. :P Can't wait to meet him. But I do like where this is heading. I love all the writers you gave a shout out to and TheRecklessBam is my inspiration for writing story quizzes. Try out my quiz Supernatural: Eerie Beginnings Part 1. Part 2 is out too! Thanks! ^__^

You should also read xxdarkxx's Which Will Fall For You seires. I've read her series when it first came out and decided to read it over every once in a while. She's another big inspiration!

I liked it!