Confinement Part 25 | Comments
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*checking GTQ for the 3rd time in an hour to avoid work* *sees Confinement part 25* splee! ^^ I just got off from browsing Deviantart, so all this is showing up in mental pictures for me xD
first scene: dark, monotone, a cliff lined with spooky gargoyles with chilly wind swirls, and Rave, hands in pockets, peering over the edge of the cliff with only a mildly interested look on his face.
scene 2: perspective is slightly tilted, Flame leaning into Lauren to deliver his charm, but Lauren's already trotting away laughing with her hair flowing out behind her, and Flame left looking slightly bemused.
scene 3: Sebastian with one hand clutching, tearing at his face in his frustration, a look of absolute fury on his face as his other arm is extended, smoke spiraling from his hand, a hole in the wall, and one small word above his head: tick. Gotta wonder what's up with him... if he made a deal that gives him power, and he only has a specified time to accomplish a task or he's doomed
Wow, Web, 5 girls, you braggart ;P Huh. Penelope seems to have gone a little spacey from spending all this time alone in her land, and she sounds like she might start flirting with Rave -_- (I imagine her almost Mad Hatter-esque [if I could actually draw, I'd love to draw some of these scenes {Pictures in my mind though never turn out the same on the paper though :P}]) oh fudge, you actually got me singing that Ke$ha song xD now it's not going to go away T.T oh my goodness, it's actually Dots! I forgot her name when you mentioned her earlier DX Sebastian is so... freaking evil T.T he's certainly giving Oath a run for his money
Even w/o the romance; this was phenomenal! The vivid descriptions, the drama, suspense - all of it = phenomenal, but that's obvious anyway since you wrote it x) Oh you're going to Europe; I'm so jealous xD have a good time (and pick up some of those cute guys, hm? ;) [oh and delicious food]) We'll miss you, Dannica! Bon voyage!
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Oh and I forgot! You can check out Beautiful Secrets, Beautiful Lies, and Beautiful Endings. The rest I am not proud of, so I don't really want to say lol. But the first one I ever made was called They Love Me which I created in sixth grade ok I was naive and under the influence of many other stereotypical stories on here :P Then I have an unfinished one called Meet Me Halfway where Rave came from, and then I have one called Somebody Special :-) But the only ones I actually want people reading are the first three and this series lol
Dannica1 -
Sebastian is a psychopath. Or maybe he just needs a diet Snapple. Lol. Web seems dangerous, but still sexy. Flame is still very arrogant, but I'm warming up to him. Tallon is just weird to me. And I should seriously start seducing Rave into making out with me ;) Lol. More action with Rave! And that girl better not flirt with him. Or I will come and beat her senseless. :) Next part please~!
EPicz1 -
OMFG THE NEXT PART THE GUYS ARE GONNA MEET?!?! I'M FANGIRLING SO EFFIN HARD RIGHT NOW *fangirl scream*
You're going to Europe?? Lucky :P Have fun, but make sure to come back in time to make part 26!
Penelope better back off my Ravey! -_- Web, you wanted to have a 6-some? How naughty ;D
I swear something is wrong with Sebastian. He's so cold hearted and mental and UGHHH
Merry Christmas, btw!! AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR
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um i dont really mind how u put me in the story because i k ur awesome so yeahh.My name is Jianna,black hair with brown highlights,brown eyes, filipino!!!,singer- Very good,funny,pretty,s weet,stylish,and very protective of her friends!Haaha well good luck!
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Thank s for commenting!Hmm, I don't know if I want to have another contest with that prize but if you want I can just put you in it :-) Just tell me how you want to be portrayed, what you look like, personality, etc. I'll try my best! :-)
Dannica1 -
I am so so so late with this and the last part I'm so sorry. Unfortunately, I can't write a decent comment today so please excuse me. This is probably the first time and will be the last time and I feel like I'm making it so formal so excuse this too. I cannot get enough of Web and Rave's part was so deep and philosophical. I really wonder what's going on with Flame and why Lauren was looking for me. MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU ALL AND I'M LEAVING ON CHRISTMAS DAY BUT TIS THE SEASON TO BE JOLLY. GET THE XMAS SPECIAL OUT. HAVE A SPECTACULAR TIME IN EUROPE. FALALALALALALALALA. I ACTUALLY SANG THAT. MERRY CHRISTMAS.
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ik im REALLY LATE but i didnt have an account at that time! So now i feel really srry for Dots becuz now shes dead and ik that she betrayed me but uk.Hahaha i hope u had fun in Europe(jealous cuz i want to travel the world). Can u plz have a contest again for a chance to b in the story becuz like i really wanted to do it in the other stories,but they were already done and again i didnt have an account and i was too late TT_TT. But if u do the contest thing than that would make my day>(/'o'/)
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This is so a late comment but as a loyal reader i must say these so commonly but necessary words: uh-oh.
PuffBall1 -
LOOOVE IT!! This was wonderful, your wonderful!! I think after I read I get brain dead? Not too werid right? Early Merry Xmas, or whatever
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DOTS WHY! or orbit... WHY YOU SELL ME OUT! >:( i'm scared of the gang, don't like web, what is going on with tallon, rave don't get hurt, flame i'm sorry...
jedi1081 -
oh my gawd guuuurrrlll, you're u TOOO GOOD! i love your writing! you make me cry that's how amazing you write! oh how i love rave. cant wait for part 26!!
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oh and can u plz comment back at me and tell me ALL ur series cuz I REALLY LOVE THEM AND I WAS WONDERING IF THERE WAS MORE!
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MY RAVE! >:O that girl better not do nothin >:I
Btw this is Teresa
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