Confinement Part 21 | Comments

Oh my god my rave crave is just so siandbakskaks

THIS PART WAS SO GOOD AND I JUST NEED A KISS RIGHT NOW

BUT OK OK OK

Club Anarchy is in a rowdy part of Pennyvania. It's an isolated building with lights pumping out and music blaring and brawls out in the street. Bouncers line the building, and there needs to be a security check. Only the baddest teens go there, and James Dawn kids are not welcome. There is a circular stage in the middle with a hazy band playing and a gigantic bar that serves even hazier drinks. There are booths set up everywhere and VIP sections. There are just teens everywhere, and it's also the headquarters of a gang. Lol that's all I got :P

That was amazing!! Omfg Rave crave! lol well ok I want to win, soooo club anarchy is a building downtown, and it's a little hole in the wall where only the people who know people know where it is and how to get in. There are two bouncers outside, who seem like two hobos, which people would normally pass by. That's why it's so exclusive. The club Is underground, and inside there's a huge stage with usually a drunken band playing on one side of the room, and the rest is filled with people dancing with blue and yellow strobe lights and a rusty bar. There are also secret rooms within the club, considering that it's underground, and any room can lead you anywhere.

I'm a horrible person; I'm commenting so late D: Brittany... Brittany is evil. I'd rather be friends with Sebastian ANY day over Brittany >:/ and Dannica... you need to stop. Stop pulling my heart in so many directions I mean! XP Oh good goodness... Rave is so -ugh- adorable. Yet, as much as all this is messing with my heart... it's so good. Dannica, you're amazing at what you do; NEVER stop

Okay. I fangirled. I rocked my mac side to side in a desperate attempt to get rid of aldkfjaldkfjasldkfj asdfnot done yet. Well Rave reminds me of an older brother even more in this one idk why but he does. I'm sorry to say this but I don't exactly have a romantic interest in him as I do Flame, or Web. But he's been a favorite so Imma keep it that way. I just love it when guys talk about themselves. It's so special when they do.

Omfg Brittany I'm going to kick you to the curb. Real life or not, those people make me so mad, I mean, mental sicknesses are not to be made fun of and I bet she will. My friend's mom has schizophrenia and you know what he said? He said, "I try to talk to her everyday so she doesn't get lonely." Okay that's touching. I've heard another guy on tv say almost the exact same thing lol (I send her a letter everyday so I won't feel guilty about not visiting my mom).

I'm suffocating. I need Flame. AND NO MORE UNFORGOTTEN SECRETS FML WHYY? No more Alex D: Can you pretty pretty please at least write about Alex that series had so much potential. Okay Flame it's you and me right now. WE KISSED SUCKAS. And I need Web. You say the club has to be something Web would go huh? Mmmhm I feel a moment *waits for it* Yeah I have a perfect place. Does it have to be private, like underground cause I was thinking New York VIP high end lol.

Dannica my emotions are so high right now ! IT'S KILLING ME THAT I DON'T KNOW IF RAVE LIKES ME OR IF HES BEING FRIENDLY PLEASE CLARIFY THIS SOON

ok now coming to BRITTANY

Who does she think she is?! Christ, what will everybody think? HOW IS SHE GOING TO SAY IT?! UGHHH

So I'm new here... and I read this series... AND MY MIND WAS BLOWN! I absolutely love it! I'm sooo torn D: I love how Flame is so hot and forward! But Rave is so mysterious and alluring... HE NEEDS TO GET WITH THE KISSING! And... I think they need to meet ;P! (P.S. I just created a quiz of my own and it's not showing up on the new quizzes page... any advice? I really want people to check out my new series!)

I'm soo late again :S

YOU GUYS AREN'T GONNA CONTINUE THE UNFORGIVEN AND UNFORGOTTEN?!?!?! D': That sucks :(

I. Will. KILL. BRITTANY!!!!!!! Can there be a scene where _____ cusses out the blonde barbies (Brittany and Megan)? I could totally help you with that *evil laugh*

How bout Web is in a fraternity? :D they meet up at this bar in town where there's a pool table and crap, kinda like a mancave/garage/base ment? Sorry that's all I can think of.

who the heck rated this a 9?SHAME ON THAT PERSON!THIS IS WORTH INFINITY OVER 10!Sorry for my outbursts....lol part 22 please you amazing writer you!

I have been waiting for this for a long time!!! Can we have some more romance with Rave??!!! Like at least a kiss, pleeeeeease!!! Rave

OKAY??!!!! OKAY!!!!????????? WUT? Goodness! Girl, when you go back to school you will go through a he(( lot of social murder all thanks to Britt.... GAHHHH!!! JUST MAKE THE NEXT ONE ALREADY!! I WANT MORE!!! :3

As for details? Um I guess those strobe lights and a dance floor? :/ sorry.

OMFG!! Dannica I hate chuuuu! Why finish at suchha aaaaaaaaah part?! I wanna kiss rave already! Part 22 ftw!

OH MY GOD THE SCENE YOU GAVE ME A HINT ABOUT! :D OH MY GOD, MAKE HIM KISS "______" PLEASE!

So for the contest, is there a certain point of the "club"?

Part 22

It was great!! Anyway that's so sad that your not going to go on!!!!!!! At aleast you have this :)