Beautiful Lies Part 10 | Comments

Wow, this is a great, yet sad, part!!!! =) There are a lot of raw emotions and finally, we get to see the other side of the flirty Alex. I was near to shedding a tear (and that's rare for me to do!). It's sad how Alex was abused by his father and how he lost the former love of his life in a horrible way!!! What kind of father does that???!! Also, it's sweet how he loves and cares for the main character so much and is able to pull out of his depression and grief for Misty. I'm sad when a character is sad :( . To answer the question of the day, ummm... I guess Zac has some kind of powerful magic or that he is part of a supernatural race that is very rare or something... I know lame but I'm not good at these kind of stuff. Even so, I want to know what's going on with Sam but Zac more so I hope you'll reveal more about them in the next part!!!! By the way, I'm liking Alex way more than Christofer (though he is sweet...) but I'll cast my vote on two separate endings! :) That way everyone's happy, except those who like one of the other guys... Part 11!!!!

OH MY FREAKING GOSH I can't decide which to do first: to punch Gritzo since he ruined that moment and is probably going to ruin my life with his sketchy Nostalgia or order that list of organizations onto Robert and have them lock him up in a DEEP, dark hole, worse than the Underbelly -.-

Zac? I think he went down and confronted Sam... and Sam almost uses his powers on him but by some fluke, messes up or something and Zac is okay :P I don't know where I got that idea from :P

I forget, what's an Astrobit?

Not sure what happened to Zac. Did he even have powers?

Also, I like the pov thing. It lets us know more without ________ knowing more.

@GlamDiva Well, you hold true to the "diva" part of your name. Ouch, that was harsh. No one deserves to be abused, even if it is a fictional character. And it just shows that he's not a blob for crying. :P

LOVED IT! I almost finally made my choice of who is my favorite but then I thought about how Christofer would feel and so I'm still torn. DANNICA WHY DO YOU HAVE TO MAKE SUCH AMAZING GUYS?! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT I HATE YOU SO MUCH! Nah I'm kidding XD But still too bad guys like that don't exist in real life and I can't wait for the next part I think Zac found out what Sam was and everything and that's why he went to that jail

Eh, I just love how I was the first to say something about the abuse, but people side with the author's. :/ Just like school. xD Maybe it was because mine wasn't as emotional. :I I also love how no one answers my question, yet again, just like real life. I can just feel the love guys. xD

This part just like totally became photocopied (well the kissy part) . Into a frame. And hung on my frickin bedroom wall!!!!! LOVED IT!!! And rob hawwww you better run boyyo befo' i kick yo' ass so hard it'll be bruising heavily while you flying across the sky to jamaica :D #machlav

Yeah Dannica im behind you 100%. And @Glamdiva Dannica works really hard to write these stories and they are amazing. What right do you have to say that it sucks, or that it was boring? If you didnt like it then you dont have to read them.

This part was boring. I hope next part will be a good one. Alex diserves what happened to him. And i dont care about him. Any guy who cries are worthless and losers. Ewwww alex is absolutley DISGUSTING.

*stairs daggers at u* by the way I'm not sopped to make my appearance here YET but I have to tell you something here, * prepares for drama* U NEEDED TO MAKE EVERY THING ALL MESSED AND HARD UP DID U??!!!!!! *rolls eyes* if u make me way more confuzeled I will littterly mentally beep and jack slap u ... Gosh

I loved this part of your series even though it was so sad.. You're an amazing writer!!!! :) I Love Alex!!! Can't wait for the next part!

stupid Gritzo. - 20% - 20%

I hoped you liked this part as much as I did, lol. Question of the day: What do you think happened to Zac in part 8?

I missed Zac, please don't let anything happen to Nick, Sam i.will.kill.you. I love Chris

@ Dannica : im emailing that to everyone i know....O.O *cries in joy* amazing....oh my im writing again! gahhh

@Dannica
*STANDS UP AND GIVES APPLAUSE*

glamdiva got burned by dannica lolol omg i'm with @ashleymae

btw this was such a good part! I LOVE ALEX *sobs*

I loved it!! What happened with Alex is SOOOOOOOOOOO sad!!!!!! I can't wait fpr the next part! I LOVE ALEX!! I also love this series!!

YOUR THE FUNNEST HUMAN BEING ON EARTH!!!!!!!!!!

question # 2 answer
DAD? is your dad hitler or....
i all most died laughing

@GlamDiva i see why that's your name. No one should ever have to be abused like that. If you were in his place i doubt he'd say the same to you(lol he's not even real) chris is ok. Do you guus wanna know who's the best guy in this? SAM!!!!!!! (even though he's evil).

i think zac is not human and oath is his father... hehe starwars... Luke (*wheeze*) I am your father (*wheeze*)

Ok maybe not the beep slaP u but ya.. No mean to hurt ya.... XD ... *frowns* but I'm series I'm keeping ma eyes on ya!! HMMMMHMMMM!!

UUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUHHH HHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHGGGGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGG GGG! You're the worst person alive, you know that right? I'm so sure I'm in love with Christofer, but now I'm pretty sure it's Alex. *sigh* VOTE ALEX PEOPLE!

i love ALEX!!!!!!!!! AND ZAC'S A BUNNY!!!!!! OMIGOD!!!! jks jks i'm just wierd xD