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  • Great start! I guess I'd make two suggestions, though they don't really relate to the story itself. Firstly, I'd highly suggest making an account as it makes it much easier to find the quizzes, and secondly, I'd love to see longer editions, though since you already said that the next one would be longer I didn't really need to say that. :)

    Anyway, excellent writing in general. The story seemed to flow very smoothly and was enjoyable to read as well. I hope to read more soon!

    music826
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  • Hmm... not bad but there could still be some improvements If you didn't know, @music826, @HogwartsLove and @vulturemonen also have their Hogwarts Love series, so I'd suggest should also check out their series for a general idea. @natuhleegayle's is of course a classic of GTQ and I'm sure you would have read it. :) I have also based my own Hogwarts series on the same model and you can also read it to get some idea. I know it's a starting quiz and most of the best writers I read here weren't good in the start but there's always a room for improvement. Otherwise, it's quite likable. :)

    hp4evr
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  • Thank you music826!! I did make an account after i made this, which is what im using right now lol! and dont worry, the next part will be a lot longer :) thanks for reading and thanks for ur comment. im glad it was enjoyable to u :)

    NicoleMS
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  • part two is up. just search NicoleMS, or A Hogwarts Love Triangle Part 2. note: i will eventually start making these for hunger games, walking dead, and one direction :)

    NicoleMS
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  • Yes hp4evr i have read @natuhleegayle's plenty of times, she's the one that inspired me. this was just the first one, i hope things will improve as i continue to re-read her series and edit mine. i dont want it to be the same though, so im having a harder time brainstorming new ideas. thanks for ur imput, i'll keep it in mind! :)

    NicoleMS
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  • part 2 will be under the account i made called NicoleMS

    thanks guys for reading and commenting!! :)

    NicoleMS
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  • thank u mcqueen and i will hopefully have it up by the 12th :)

    NicoleMS
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  • Loved it make part 2 asan (as soon as now)

    mcqueen
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