Twisted Maximum Ride | Comments

this story has a lot of major flaws, no offense.

#1: fang is tan, not pale. read the books for proof.

#2: ari is 7 years old, and he's a love interest? he's also an ERASER, in case you didn't realize that.

#3: max is not a weak willed girl. even if she was ordered by someone she trusted to kill the hottest guy in the world, she would do it, not fall for a guy the first time he smiles at her, which brings me to my next point.

#4: fang is supposed to be hostile to outsiders. what makes him suddenly smile at a girl he doesn't know, invite her to stay with them, and hold her hand when he barely even knows her?

#5: and why the heck does the flock just disappear? this is not making much sense.

i was planning on reading the whole series but i'm just bored and disappointed now. sorry.

I don't think so xevx. Fang is mine!

i am the first to comment so i get fang he is all mine!!!! mine i tell u mine!!