Tonight (a love story) part one | Comments

sorry but i didnt really like it. you have to WOW The crowd. in my high school it is for talented, we have singing, acting, instrumental, and art classes. unless you sign up for another special class. anyways in our acting class our teacher told us that to make a story good u have2 do the least unexpected. make "Carly" grt pregnant, get main character girl get married. wow the crowd. got it? hope my advice helped, bye.

I liked it but it needs more detail

wait did jessie dump hunter? y did carley thx her? IM CONFUSED! ( wich happens alot )

wait did jessie dump hunter? y did carley thx her? IM CONFUSED! ( wich happens alot )

i luv it how does hunter and i look
can't wait 4 part 2