The Truth, The Lies, and the Love. ~part 1~ | Comments

Not bad, I definitely see promise in this series :) Like was already mentioned, the missing paragraph made it a little confusing (I'm guessing it went after the seat on the bus conflict and before the loud teacher?) and I noticed that 2 of your paragraphs repeated. Through all that though, I see the promise of an upcoming series. Maybe you could go back and fix the missing paragraph or just explain the information we missed in the next quiz or here in the comments?

@xxblutixx- I have bad, horrific news! There's this fraud named Gregory Ronald Simcock who said J.K. Rowling "stole" Harry Potter from him and he called her a liar ! =O So I sent Voldermort's ghost on his sorry butt in Australia

XD I like the sound of that group, the one thing that I would approve of from Voldemort... well I think his name sounds cool too, it's a shame he hated people saying it XP

@rabia I'm sorry we're taking up your comment page

@Aria I have to go, but here's my email if you ever want to talk : subtleindigo@hotmai l (.) com

Hmm..I'm not sure what I think of this quiz. That's quite impossible for me because I always have a thought about a quiz. Um, well this is awkward. I think I should say, "It was a tat bit confusing but okay." Keep it up (: I look forward to the next one !

Oh yeah! I forgot to mention Umbridge and the centaurs and Grawp are on his tail! I recruited all of the Members. it's called "No s--- In Voldermort's Territory." Voldermort was the founder. xP

WHAT?!? Oh no he didn't, good choice Aria. Umbridge should visit him with that nasty quill of hers because he "must not tell lies"

It makes sense. You just need to focus a little more on the plot of the story rather than the boys (: An exciting plot is the key to a great story ! =)

Great quiz, it was a little confusing to read but i think that this quiz is defiently going to be great(:, cant wait for part 2!

A little hard to follow, I'd reccomend reading your story before you post it. Other than that, it was good.

@XxrabiaxX- email me at hallo_night@hotmail (.)com without the brackets of course (: I'll chat with you and see if i can come up with some ideas xP

Haha hey Aria! ^^

Oh thanks rabia ^^

@XxrabiaxX- I emailed you. Did you get it?

@xxblutixx- i emailed you (: