The Girl Who Lived part 43 | Comments
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Well, once again, this was brilliant! I just love how original this story is; you have some really unique ideas. If there is one criticism I could offer it is that there are occasional tense slip ups between past and present, but otherwise it's great! Oh, and just so you know, I'm not leaving GTQ completely. I'll still be here, reading and commenting as usual. :) Can't wait for Part 44!
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"Nice save." I commented. He stands, puts the plates on the granite countertop and offered me a hand. "Thanks." His face was oval shaped and his hair went to his shoulders. There were red streaks in his dark brown hair outlined his face and was pulled back in in a ponytail. His eyes were a dark brown but not to the point of the almost appearing black. He looked like a kind person now but on the street I wouldn't wanna mess with him.
that person kinda sounds like Bill from Harry Potter :3
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Hmm.... I guess so. I wasn't thinking about Bill when I did this. I wanted to do another person who was a ginger but I figured that people who didn't like the Weasley pairings would be like
"Oh Gosh no, not another ginger." So I figured I'd make him have a different look.
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That's great! Thanks for the criticism. I try to make what happens within the book as often as I can but I alter it a tad so it won't be plagiarism and so it can fit what I want to happen.
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Good story!
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Thank you
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