The Alone and Togethers~part 1 | Comments

Oh, ignore the low score I got as my result; I got lazy in clicking the answers xD but I did like this story so far. Two critiques:

1. Watch out for typos! Perhaps look over the story once before you publish it to avoid those, or you could run it through a word processor like Microsoft Word or even Google docs to perform a spell check. Removing the spelling errors makes the story appear more professional and helps to keep the reader focused on the story itself rather than getting distracted by and accidental "y" in the middle of a word or something.

2. This isn't really a critique, but I wish it was longer with more writing! I do want to read more of this story, and I hope someone else will give it a chance (because most of the regular readers haven't been on all that much recently D: ). I'll keep an eye out for part 2 :)

Omg amazing!! Loved it!! Part 2!! Oh, can you make the next part longer, because this one was really short

OMG- LOVED the quiz PLEAS PUT OT PART TWO!!!!!