Surrender Part 5 | Comments

Glad to see you back writing! I was afraid this would end up being just another of those abandoned stories :c Nono. I love when you describe the outfits because so little people do that anymore, and I love your combinations :3 The descriptions are superb! What? But... but I don't want to break such a pretty stone T.T oh... repaired? Okay then... Everything on this planet is so pretty , how can they stand it? :o Oh my goodness >.> Sean, calm down >.> *mutters royal brat... hot royal brat* Pierce is slightly better, but condescending .-. sooo Malcolm is most favorable at the moment *random squeeze huggles Chantou* she's sooo sweet and innocent and loyal and x3 ack, adorable.

Pierce is a know-it-all, Malcolm is alpha and I'm just arm candy, and Sean has emotion issues, heyyyy Jared, let's go back to Earth? XD heck no, actually, it's so much better here ;) Let's just get a cracklacking on proving to Pierce that he isn't some superior being above humans, to Malcolm that I have a perfectly capable mind of my own, and to Sean that he needs to be taught trust or moderation or control or... something. They're all very good characters though, having their flaws, in my opinion, and I'm excited to see how they'll develop to try and win *me* over ;P Can't wait for the next part!