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(Cover image is latest OC) Hello! Here you can see other people’s OCs rated, and you can even enter you own OC. Just use the form below and comment your answers. The form is also in the afternote. I can do any fandoms, but I may not know it. Thanks!

Form (don’t make this super long): Grading Sytsem (numbers or percents. The percents more detailed and recommended), Fandom, Name, name meaning, nicknames, age, gender, species, appearance, personality, disorders, likes, dislikes, powers, backstory, family, friends, significant other, enemies, other. I will accept Joke Sues. My comments are in parentheses. Based on appearance I create the character in picrew for cover image. UPDATE: I can now take answers in different languages. I can also use that language to write the review along with English. I am fluent in English and French, while other languages I will put through google translate. Please let me know if I got something wrong.

Created by: Melonie1

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  1. OC #3: (example) Tanner Clifton by Julia (grading system: numbers)
  2. Fandom: hunger games (I am doing a series of the tributes in the 73rd hunger games - you can write a fanfic using some of my characters)
  3. Name: Tanner Aryan Clifton (ok)
  4. Name meaning: Tanner - leather maker, Aryan - noble and well educated, Clifton - town by the cliff (ok. Aryan is perfect if they are part of the careers)
  5. Nicknames: Cliff for everyone - almost no one knows that his name is Tanner (ok, nice nickname based on last name.)
  6. Age: 17 (ok, right at the edge. Like I said before, all overused ages are hunger games ages, so that’s good.)
  7. Gender: male (ok)
  8. Species: human (👍)
  9. Appearance: messy caramel brown hair and olive green eyes, beige skin, always has a satisfied smirk on his face. (Ok. This is a great appearance. I am guessing he is a career from the smirk.)
  10. Personality: satisfied, arrogant, ungrateful, secretly caring, loyal (I’m glad that there are positive traits, most career OCs are only arrogant. I love the secret personality, I hope he learns to be kind to all.)
  11. Disorders: none (ok)
  12. Likes: training, being better than everybody else, listening to his little sister’s laugh (that is so sweet! I hope this comes out in his personality!) Dislikes: other districts (ok)
  13. Powers: none (good)
  14. Backstory (part one): The reaping - he stood next to his age group, smirking as the reaping was about to start. He was at the limit of being picked, so he needed to be picked. He wanted the glory. As the lady in pink said, “ladies first,” his smile faded. He looked at his little sister Aleah across the area. She looked nervous. It was only here second reaping. She was so small, he was afraid she wouldn’t win if she was put in the arena. He let out a sigh of relief when her name wasn’t called. When his name was called, he walked up to the stage and smirked. But when his eyes met Aleah’s, he frowned. She was scared. For him. (Great so far! Love the twist at the end.) The parade: he wore a jeweled suit with a cape behind it. He looked down at his partner. She was small, and couldn’t be more than 12 years old. She was going to be an easy target. She smirked again as the chariot went into the crowd as they roared. Training scores: he paced around the room, anxious to know his training scores. As district one flashed onto the screen, he smirked. A nine was perfect. (Ok, so we are now seeing his dark side. Love the switch between character, almost like two personalities taking surfaces…
  15. Interview: he played it deadly. Confident. Arrogant. He was winning. He knew it. The bloodbath: he looked around before the timer went off. He knew he was going to the cornucopia. He ran into it and grabbed an ax. He swung it at someone, but missed. He then spotted his district partner. There was no way she was joking the careers. He threw the ax, and just as it hit her chest and she crumpled to the ground, she saw her face. Fear. Disbelief. Betrayal. He saw his sister’s face. He looked at his hands. What has he done? (Love this)
  16. Day one: he walked around he cornucopia with the rest of the careers. They decided one would stay back and watch the area while the others hunted for tributes. The district four girl stayed behind. He walked around the woods for a couple hours, when he heard a noise. He looked into a cave nearby, where he saw a tribute passed out from exhaustion. One of the careers killed him quickly. Cliff laughed and kicked dirt on the tribute. They all walked back to the cornucopia. (This personality switch is amazing…)
  17. Day 7: two careers have died so far from a trap and bled out. This time they decided to go deeper into the abandoned city. Then suddenly he heard a strange noise. Small mutts were everywhere! He lunged for shelter, and got some in a small building. He looked back where the district four girl was fighting them off. She was loosing. He had gotten to know her and taken a liking in her lately. He jumped in front of her where a mutt was going to kill her. He fell to the ground as the mutt raised its vale above his heart. His eyes met a camera. “I’m sorry, Aleah. I’m sorry I couldn’t get back to you.” (Wow. That is such a great backstory! -0.5)
  18. Family: Milea Clifton - mother, Jonathan Clifton - father, Aleah Clifton - little sister (ok)
  19. Friends: a lot (a bit more specific please? +1)
  20. Significant other: Mimie Waters (crush) (the district 4 girl I am guessing? I’m glad he learned to sacrifice himself.)
  21. .5/30 great score! He is a good character. You can use him for a fanfic idea, but credit me, Julia and put my quiz name in it. Also, if you make that fanfic please put the name of it in the comments so I can read it. I would love to see how you put him in the story!
  22. OC #4: Mimie Waters by Lucy - grading system: numbers (this is by my friend, as she decided to add on to my hunger games series.)
  23. Fandom: hunger games (no comment)
  24. Name: Mimie Anita Waters (good name, but the last name is very overused for someone in her district. In reality her last name would be something that doesn’t relate to where she lives. Other than that, I like it! +2)
  25. Nicknames: Annie for her family, just Mimie for everyone else. (ok)
  26. Age: 16 (ok, extremely overused but as I said in the other two, it’s fine.)
  27. Gender: female, species: human (ok)
  28. Appearance: She has curly brown hair that goes to her shoulders and soft blue eyes. She has beige skin and freckles dotting her nose and cheeks. (Good appearance.)
  29. Personality: Daydreamer, Open minded, creative, passionate, witty, feisty (ok, good personality. These go together pretty well.)
  30. Disorders: maladaptive daydreaming (I actually have maladaptive daydreaming. This whole idea for the 73rd hunger games OCs came from me daydreaming in math class. This is a very distracting disorder, so I wonder how she will handle it in the hunger games.)
  31. (I am skipping likes, dislikes, and powers because I am almost at my question limit.) Backstory: reaping - As she sat in the train, she looked at her feet. She had volunteered for a game that would probably get her killed. But she had to. She couldn’t just let her best friend die. She buried her face in her hands. Parade - she was wearing a long coral dress with fishnets at the bottom. She hated dresses. As the chariot went by, she mostly just looked strait. She wanted to get this over with. Training scores - she stared at the screen as the training scores flashed through. As she saw the image of the tributes, she thought in her head of what the games would be like. Suddenly she got blinked back into reality with her partner shaking her. She had missed all the training scores. He told her she got a 7. (Great so far!)
  32. Interview - she had crazy ideas, so she decided to act like she had a plan. She normally just winged stuff, so no one from her district will be convinced. But Ceaser was impressed. Bloodbath - She didn’t realize the conch was blown until about a minute later. She ran off the platform. She went into the battlefield, then realized that was stupid and turned around, grabbing a small backpack. She ran into the forest, and then realized that was stupid as well, as she was a career. She ran back, and the fighting was over. Several dead bodies littered the floor. The district 2 girl glared at her as she didn’t help them out. Normally district four didn’t join the careers, but she wanted to. It was her best chance of survival. So, maybe she did have a plan. She proved her district wrong. They probably think she won’t kill anyone. She is going to prove them wrong. (This is intense.)
  33. Day 8: She looked up at the stars. She was sitting alone in the forest. Yesterday, the district one boy had saved her. The ruthless, cold, arrogant Cliff. But several days before he had opened up to her. He told her about his sister and how he was so worried about her. He told her about how he killed his partner, then regretted it. He was scared. He was just a person, like everyone else in this ruthless game. To her, he would always be Tanner. (This is so sad and sweet! I can’t do anymore rn.)
  34. the after math: Mimie smiled as a cannon boomed. She won. She did it. The capitol came and all her injuries got healed. After all the excitement of winning the games, she moved into the capitol. It was such a nice house! But as she went on the visit to all the districts, she started to think of all the children who died. This year most of the competitors were extremely young, the average about 13 or 14 years old. She read the speech the capitol wrote for her aloud at all the districts. She had won. She was sorry for everyones’ loss. As she stared at the beautiful capitol everyday, she started to think. Did she really win? Or is it just some hypnotizing idea that the capitol put in her head? She thought about Tanner. He wanted to win, too. During the visit of district one she had caught a suite of his sister. She looked like he did. And she was scared. How would she continue on without her brother? The next year Katniss Everdeen and Peeta Mellark won. She stared at the screen, watching them talking. They were happy. Just as she was before. But as the winners looked at the screen, she felt like she needed to tell them something. “No one wins the games. And soon, you will find out on…
  35. Family: Axel Waters - father, Megara Waters - mother (ok)
  36. Friends: Vanilla Sweet (“Vanilla Sweet?” Her parents must be interesting people…)
  37. Significant other: Tanner Clifton - crush (I still love how he sacrificed himself to save her.)
  38. Enemies: Skylee - she never forgave her for killing that girl (I’m glad she has morals)
  39. Other: she never was part of the rebellion. She actually used it as an opportunity to run away. She decided to steal a boat from her district and go away to find another place. No one ever saw her again. If she is living is unknown. (That is a pretty good fanfic idea, to have another place when the hunger games in happening…)
  40. 1/30. This is incredible! She is a balanced OC. Good job, Lucy! Also, Lucy said that anyone can use this OC as fanfic if they credit her and me as I helped her with the idea. She would also want the link in the comments so she and I can see it. Also, I have gotten no OCs from this website, so if you are enjoying this and are a user in gotoquiz, please add an OC you have. Thanks!
  41. OC #5: Elle Anderson by Melonie1 (A new OC! Thanks Melonie1!)
  42. Fandom: Pjo/HoO and Hunger Games I guess???? (You guess? Now I am curious. How is it kinda Hunger Games? Anyway, good!)
  43. Name: Elle Rose Anderson (good name! Not too common but not super weird or obvious.) name meaning: Elle - Sun ray, light; She, Rose - rose, flower (Ok)
  44. nicknames: None (ok!) age: 13 (Ok. Again, super overused. Since you did not say it was in the Hunger Games universe, I am adding +.5)gender: Female (overused, but I won’t deduct anything)
  45. species: Legacy (oh, a legacy? And not the daughter of one of the seven? I like Elle already! -1)
  46. appearance: light beige skin, bright red hair that goes to her shoulder blades, full heterochromic eyes (brown and blue), petite structure (Very Cute)
  47. personality: caring, soft spoken, patient, sweet, affectionate, bright, too optimistic, gullible, loves balance (Ok. Here’s the thing. Her personality is great, but she is lacking flaws. Add more flaws to make her more interesting and layered. +1)
  48. disorders: horrible dyslexia (Hmm. Interesting. How does this affect her?)
  49. Likes: sweet snacks, obstacle courses, hanging out with her friends (good likes.) Dislikes: people who are rude, cheese, fighting (cheese? Pfff. My older sister hates cheese, which is super weird. They would be best friends!)
  50. Powers: controlling luck to some extent (Daughter of furtuna? Good goddess that is underused. -.5)
  51. Backstory: Elle is the legacy of Furtun and her dad is the son of her. She goes to camp half blood during the summers. One day the gods decides to have their own “Hunger Games” to decide which god will rule. She is put in section 8, or Athena, to get reaped. She gets reaped and I am still figuring out if she dies or not. (Oh, now I get what you mean! I bet the gods would actually do this. Why is she in the Athena section? Does she have some sort of connection? +1)
  52. Family: Elizabeth Anderson (mom), Carter Anderson (dad) (Good)
  53. Friends: Lily Junea and Emily SooneSignificant other: none!Enemies: monstersOther: none (Ok for all of the them.)
  54. 1/30. Great score! Elle is very interesting and I would love to see her fanfic if you ever make one!
  55. UPDATE: I will not be able to update this quiz anymore, so I am linking it to Melonie1’s account. She agreed to take this quiz. Bye!
  56. UPDATE: Hi! This is the new author Melonie1. If you have an OC, can you share it in the comments so I can rate it? Thanks!

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