Life is not fair (story) | Comments
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SO I like your story line, and you've got great details! However, you need to make it a little more fluent. It was a little confusing in some parts, so maybe focus more when you're putting your sentences together?
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I LOVED IT PLEASE CONTINUE!
Jayla1 -
It kinda confused me, but for the most part, it was good.
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confused a bit, but i simply want the next part
angelic41 -
Me like sky :p
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aww i like sky
part 2
can't waitAZY1
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