Immortal part 2 | Comments

You updated quickly ^^ Love it! James is so polite, and Demitri is cool ;) I can't wait to read more of this story, and I'm glad to hear that some big things are coming up and that we'll get to know the guys better

P.S. Happy late Christmas! And I agree with DaughterOfApollo, you don't have to apologize if it was long xD

*Chants* NEXT PART!! NEXT PART!!

So good. And don't apologize if it was long, only if it was short. :P. Oh gosh, my dirty minded brain turned that into something else XD.

I LOVED IT ALMOST AS MUCH AS I LOVE MY BOYFRIEND. It was unpredictable, interesting and deserves a part three b4 the new year.

MEH GAHD IT ENDED TOO SOON!
I NEED PART 3 TO LIVE!
LITERALLY!

loljk. ok. i have been waiting forever for part 2 and i will wait another eternity for part 3. and wait... what do you mean something big will happen? dont tell me ill be stabbed by the knife again! IM GONNA DIE! oh wait... I WONT! hihihihihihihihihih ihi!

awesome! Keep it up! Cant wait for part 3! :-)

oh yeah! make sure you put part 4 on new year and part 3 before new year! ^-^